Beautifully written, but the continuity errors are too much for me. In the Yotsuba arc, Misa didn't have her memories, and also, Light was not in high school at that point. In fact, he'd moved onto university by the time he so much as met L, and I think that's an especially important detail to stick to if you go with a premise like this.

That. Is. So. Sad. :/

I really liked it. Especially the ending line. Perfectly laid out and written, and heartbreaking too.

It was a great fic, really

I love it!

and good work with Misa's POV, I liked your mature!misa better...

Ah, if this only happened in the manga. L would have never died.

No, Light and L would be too busy with each other.

XDDDDDDDDD

Good work! Really shows Misa's feelings of shock when they started making out and realization where Light would choose a fellow genius over a dye caked, airheaded blondie.

Matsuda. Poor, poor Matsuda. He will be forever scarred.

Grammar was great, characterization was fantastic (despite the fact that regardless of our dreams, they will never kiss) and flow was great.

Awesome work, this!

~Ciao~

I almost feel bad for Misa. Almost. But she really should have seen that coming. She had it right when she realized that Ratio the genius could never have really loved her or even liked her. But I do feel sorta bad. The story was absolutly amazing though. I almost expect this to be an actual episode, you capture them so perfectly.

Awww... poor Misa. :( Great writing, though. LOVED that last sentence. It summed the whole thing up in a beautiful, bittersweet kind of way.

I love your Misa! She's given a whole deeper look than the airheaded model, thank you!

Such a sweet piece of writing. Especially the last line.

aww. so sad. poor misaa. but yeahh l. lol. beautiful.

beautiful.

What a great fic.

There's not a great deal of good fic sympathetic to Misa out there, and you just pinned her perfectly. Oh, and the spoon thing win. Heartstopping win. But yes, L/Light hotness aside, great fic on the more serious front as well. Really felt terrible for Misa. And beautifully written.

Great work.

This is...outstanding. I never thought I'd feel so much for Misa as I did in this fic. As a character I've never been particularly fond of (never hated her, per se...but found her kind of...obnoxious), I've never really read anything from her point of view. She's a character who was always in a very pathetic state, really, and you used that state so perfectly here. Lovely. The way you portrayed her here was perfectly in-character, and quite beautiful. A definite fave.

Yes! Beautiful! You wrote Misa perfectly, and the little dash of Matsuda really pulled things together. Great work.

Awesome work. It's very refreshing reading something from Misa's POV. Ha, I'm a sucker for LxLight but to see it from someone else's eyes and of Misa of all people - nice work. (:

The ending could use a little work. I'm not sure why but it kind of drags down the climax of the story. Maybe it could be better worded?

Overall, great job.

That was sad, yet mildy entertaining. I suppose Misa would get a better answer from the mirror at home. Though I was a bit confused at the angle at what the mirror was facing.

..love it!

my first favorite death note fic~

:)