whee! i can't wait! this was great so i expect the sequel to be the same. by the way, i think she's better with edmund than peter.

wow! oh man this story is so way intense! and crazy... MAN... words cant describe how i feel about this. you are an awesome writer...! god...

and sorry 4 not reviewing earlier.

wow! INTENSE! ive been reading this all the way and this is a wonderful story. and this chapter...WOW!

Great story at time i became greatly annoyed with the drama but all was well in the end. To the sequel

Why is she forgetting this is not okay

Ahh I can't help myself... Played water polo for two years and wanted to say that people don't wear goggles in water polo, and their heads nearly never go underwater... We always swim with our heads out. Also I thought it was strange that they were talking during the game. It's usually really loud in the pool during a game.. And the game moves really quickly so it was strange that Kay didn't shoot right after getting the ball. That is unless she was trying to fake out the goalie which isn't described. Sorry it was bothering me... Anyways, great story!

First thing you smell after you died pizza. welp that's awesome

The first chapter was good, this chaoter, well... at first it was entertaining, but then it kind of started feeling forced. I don't know, I felt as if you just edited the first part and then the last part you left it the same. Meh, I'm still going to read this.

This story is amazing! The plot is great and the story very well written:) The sequel is also awesome! AND your fic. The Accidental Arrival of Lauren Harris( outstanding!) is a fic I read over and over again! It would be great if you wrote something on Peter's view after he was given the antidote and realized what He has done! Anyway, I love your stories and will definitely keep reading them:) Happy writing!

Did you know the book version *which I have by the way the old one from the 70s) they don't get attacked by the Wolves?

Instead the beavers actually lock the front door hoping it would stall the Witch Queen and they don't get chased until a ways after they are out of the tunnel.

OH MY GOSH! I can not believe how much I love this story! It's beautiful! I hope you write 500 more stories about this. I don't want it to end.

-B

Interesting

When I read this I couldn't help but read the priest's voice as the one from The Princess Bride. "Yoo ahv zah wings"

I love the quality of this story and the character Makayla, but please. I wanted to hurl when they explained about Kay's 'super speed' and 'strength of a hundred men'. :(
MARY SUE!