It was a great idea ! But have you abandoned your story ?

This is awesome! Very interesting twist on the plot. :)

i am liking the possibilities in this story, its... intriguing. not gonna try and force you to write more, but simply letting you know that its still being read, and appreciated :)

ok?

it's a very interesting start, though i find myself itchy to read the redo part: flashbacks are all good and well, but if you put them all together, it gets rather boring; in my opinion, it's better to start on the real story after the prologue and insert every now and then the flashbacks, but just when they are really useful, otherwise, that just disrupts the story too much.

anyway, hope to read more soon, this story sure is promising :)

This is a good update.

Loves it! great start! update soon!