This is and will forevermore be one of my favorite fanfics. I am absolutely in love with your writing and the progressive relationship, not to mention the ending! Oh the ending is amazing! It's sad that it must come to a close, but all good stories must, however I daresay there was not a bit of your story I didn't like. I especially loved the narrator's voice. Now I thank you for writing this! Cheers~

This story was wonderful! Thanks for writing!

You really succeed in capturing the style of the original story and somehow simultaneously you are able to develop the characters into more rounded characters with big emotional range. I wrote a fanfic with a smiliar plot some years ago, even though I carried it out quite differently and with less success. I enjoyed it tremendously; thank you so much.

May I say that the narrative voice for this charming tale is entirely beguiling?

Absolutely amazing!

I love your style of writing.. it's so charming, like a book written 100 years ago. :)
The way Wendy & Hook converse is interesting & amusing.

I love it! Your story , the plot, the writing style, everything! Thank you for the wonderful tale!

Simply superb. I tip my hat.

That was a wonderful story. I simply love it! And your writing was amazing! Bravo!

Oh my word. This was amazing to read! I don't usually read fanfiction that is based on novels, as I usually gravitate toward anime and movies, but I am really glad I did start reading this one. The plot was magnificent and very well thought out. I love how you used the narrative in the chapters.

I was very hard pressed to sleep last night, as I was only halfway though the story. Damn you and your beautiful writing! Please write more stories!

Brilliant story. Bravissimo!

This is quite moving:

"'You sacrificed vengeance and desire for mercy; a noble thing. Good Form, Father would call it.'

"Good Form. How those words sank into Hook's heart!"

Bravo for using pulchritudinous in a fan fic. I'm enjoying the story. On to the next chapter.

lovely xxxx

ok, i just want to say... this is wonderful so far. i'm delighted at how you're mimicing the classic narative style of the original work. it's so much fun to read and i can't wait to continue.
also, bravo on managing the timing so well. too many neverland writers take way too long in the opening parts, spending neerly three chapters in london and in wendy's thoughts without even a hint of any james hook. but this progressed beautifully, and i admire you for that.
well done!