ohmygodohmygodohmygod! loveloveLOOOOVE! i didnt want to stop to comment on the other chapters cos i was too busy finding out what was happening next, lol

aww thats cute...The start was sorta angsty but it all came together in the end...Good job

Well, there were a few mistakes here and there, but nothing too big. If you got someone to read it over (someone really good in English), then those would be eliminated very quickly.

I like the idea that Sirius tries to force himself to be gay, just so Remus would stay with him.

See you next chapter!

this is so good and sweet and i love it to pieces! i didn't review the second chapter because it made me sad, but your whole story is amazing. a few minor spelling mistakes here and there, but nothing big. i'm so happy right now. thank you for this piece of awesomeness!

gah poor remus! why is sirius such a poop? ah well, great story. you're a very good writer (especially since this isn't your first language. amazing! i wish i were bilingual). on to the next chapter!

In some spots it's obvious that English isn't your first language, but it's a very good story. The emotions are so real and everyone was in character. :.)

oh my fucking god, i really reaaly love you

thanks

"Here I am. Take me! But please, please, be my friend again!’ Or maybe something like this: ‘Comeback to me, without you I’m just a shadow of my former self. And by the way, my body is yours forever…"

those lines were rather hilarious...this was a brilliant fic, funny and bittersweet.

I think this is a very realistic sketch of what might have happened between those two. Great work!

oh no! don't tell me that was the end! please continue the story, it was so cute :) (and i'd like to see some more action between them ;) )

i like the story very much, just correct some typos and such and it'll be perfect!

Cute! Yay they're sorta kinda together now! :) Will be waiting impatiently for the next chapter!

Great story!

hey i loved it, good stuff! you know... an epilogue would be really great, with everyone's reactions and stuff - just a suggestion. anyway, awesome writing, only one complaint, 'then' and 'than' are different words, just watch you use them in the right context - EVERYBODY seems to use THEN when they mean THAN (eg. should be 'more THAN that' not 'more THEN that').i know im stupid for caring but it really annoys me. anyhow, keep writing ;)

awh, that was so sweet and good!

That was funny. XD Sirius' experiment went a little wrong in the end. XD Okay, it probably isn't meant to be funny but...continuation yes?