Lol this was cute. Still I wish t were a longer story

Why would Hermione even listen to Ron without any proof?! Hell why would u believe someone without any evidence? I guess she thought Harry was playing with her feelings because she let's her insecurities get in the way, but still...

More or less a good story. The part where Harry just forgave moRon right away is bad.

I don't think I've seen the "Harry and Hermione have to touch for 'x' number of hours or they become sick" idea used outside of a soulbond fic. It was a nice touch. The awkward and embarrassing moment when someone inevitably has to use the bathroom and the other one has to be there is always good for a laugh.

I thought that Hermione was a bit quick to believe Ron about Harry's "motives" for dancing with her. You'd think that after knowing them both for 3 years that she'd know that Harry wouldn't be that cruel to someone (much less her) and that Ron has a habit of talking out of his ass and pushing her buttons. She should have known better. Maybe it was her own insecurities messing with her head, but she was kinda lucky after her talk with Parvati that Harry still wanted to date her if her feelings for Harry could be that easily confused by something Ron said.

Still... I'm glad that you had Parvati talk some sense into her. Apparently this was one of those situations where an outside, unbiased opinion was needed to help someone who was too close to the situation see it for what it really was.

I'm glad that they put Ron on notice for his behavior and questioned where it was coming from. I don't remember anyone doing that in canon, so he had no reason not to do something like this again and again.

Wow. Hermione is an absolute idiot. She wouldn't have not given Harry a chance to explain nor should she have immediately thought the worst of harry and accuse him of playing with her feelings. Does she not know him better than that? Does she not trust him?

I think the twins got off too lightly. Great story! Thanks

I'm guessing the inspiration for that curse of the Twins' came from the ST:TNG episode "Attached" where Picard and Crusher are somehow linked to the point where if they moved too far from each other they'd get sick.

I agree that Ron at this point would say something so stupid. This was good. Thanks!

I quite enjoyed it. I think Hermione overreacted a bit at Ron, he's hardly been the best judge of character and motivation that year, but otherwise was very enjoyable.

Stuck Like Glue by HarmoniousHerdFan has that sort of idea and was a good read. The pair get stuck by the Twins by an artifact I believe and have to live with being stuck together.

'all lived happily ever after ' what is this, a children story book?!

After all, what's a murderous Dark Lord and his many minions, compared to the trauma of teenage relationships? :)

Loved it.

Thanks, I like it :-)

A great short story

That was cute. I liked it. The ending was a bit rushed though but still good

Love it. Wasn't expecting that from Ron but all the Weasley's reactions are on par. She should've left th twins curse on longer though lol