IM SO NERVOUS READING THE END OF CHAPTER NINE

no need to apoligize for the cyjinx dont worry *whisper i like cyjinx more than cybee*

To give a quick criticism before a full review (which I will post tomorrow) Ravens real name isn't Rachel, "Rachel Roth" was an alias she used in the comics when she went out as a civilian. While it's true her mothers last name was Roth and Raven used that last name because of that, she was given the name Raven by the azerathians. If there's another version of TT that states otherwise please correct me, it just kinda brought me out of the story when Raven told BB to call her Rachel but that was only a few scenes. Overall I really loved this story and will be giving my full review tomorrow or sooner.

I really love what you did here. Hands down, one of the best BBRAE stories I've read. This could actually, legitimately be adapted into an animated film, it's so well done. If I had to complain about one thing, it would be the Cyborg Jinx shipping. I was never big on that. Other than that though, fantastic. Keep up the good work.

Hey, the Flash thing is ok. We can just say he's kissing Artemis.

B-E-Autiful Story! I really was on-edge the entire time reading! Also, BBRae moments were adorable!

Very nice little twist there at the ending. This story is one of the most well-written ones I've read in a long while.

Kid Flash is a little over the top, but not that far a cry from the comics. He is portrayed as a hopeless flirt. That and with them all still being teens/young adults, bad decisions are bound to be made.

Anywho, I am 100% loving this story already, I needed a nice, long, BBRae fic that didn't throw everyone all out of character. Plus it's completed! I don't have to wait for updates because ain't nobody got time fo that! haha

I hope that you continue to write amazing stories, Teen Titans or otherwise.

Stardust

Shit I'm begging for my heart to be broken aren't I by reading this again especially after reading an Elivia22 story huh

This story is absolutely wonderful. The plot was great and unique. I was hooked throughout the entire story.

Phew, I think this is the fastest I've ever read. But it was well worth it. I must congratulate you for managing to have OC's that don't drive me insane - I'm extremely strict and unforgiving when it comes to OC's, but I actually liked yours. So, kudos. More importantly, this story is excellently written overall, and skillfully paced. This is one of the few times where the story feels so complete that I'm not even upset it's over - it was amazing, yes, but it feels whole, it feels right that it ended here.

In short, I had a great time; thanks for writing one of the best Titans fics I've come across.

great start, one of the key things that define a story is the first page and you did amazing

This AMAZING! Great job!

if you would combine all 4 of your new characters together you'd get my own character Strike. The only major differences are that he's one person and he cant't controll the elements, only bend them to his will. Basically if you locked him in an airtight room with steel walls, he'd be just another human. Love the story so far. ~Har

This was a fantastic story!