| Reviews for Untold Story |
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crazybrit1987 chapter 1 . 3/20/2012 hi i am just curious why are re editing this it is great :D |
PurpleLemonadex3 chapter 39 . 4/4/2010 ahh awesome story! :D but really is this how it ends? is there another part? |
Anon chapter 39 . 3/28/2010 okay so i just spent half the day reading this, and i enjoyed it, i like that Jazz is getting involved with Henry, i think they go great together i like your writing style too, it's interesting enough to keep me reading and interested, even if i have figured half of the plot out before hand, but thats no your writing its more that i've read too much batman fanfiction and watch too many movies, plus i have this annoying habit of going through every possible scenario and deciding how likely they etc. etc. i don't usually like batgirl fics in the beyond universe but your's are really well done, i must admit i like that she quit *guilty face but that's just me on a sidenote have you seen the jlu ep epilogue? 'cause i'd really like to know your thoughts on that and whetheryour stories are meant to be AU compared to that or not :) |
Olena chapter 39 . 3/19/2010 hey SilentBat18-What gives? Where's the rest of it? I'm speechless, I'm doing an great imitation of the Goldfish right now. That was so abrupt. What happened? Did you get bored, are you working on something else? Is there going to be another installment? What Happened? It seems unfinished to me. What's going to happen to Jazz next? Please please please please please write more. |
Olena Hoanda chapter 30 . 12/29/2009 You know that yours is the best batman beyond fanfic that I have ever read? Well, it is! It is awesome!Please keep writing and updating...the suspense is killing I have to know, are or will Jazz and Terry romantically involved? Please update soon! |
anon chapter 5 . 12/16/2009 cools |
anachronismism chapter 27 . 11/24/2009 nice story :) |
DanaPanda chapter 22 . 5/23/2009 really good story i love how you write it can't wait till your next ones _ |
Chargone chapter 20 . 9/7/2008 ya know, i find myself mostly subconsciously rendering this in my head as past tense? then every now and then i notice it's not and my brain glitches slightly *laughs* that consistency that lets me do that, because i don't have to Think about it, is a very good thing. heh. i did like this chapter. it's just... err... i won't say perfect, because there's bound to be something that could be better that i'm missing. such is life. but it's pretty darn close :D fear my useless review of doom! Chargone, who is still here and still reading. |
Borrowed Twenties chapter 20 . 9/4/2008 You took such a long time I was beginning to get worried you wouldn't update. But yay, you did(: Alright so I know there are tons of other commitments one can have so yeah sorry for being impatient. But I do hope you'll update as soon as you can, still! |
Borrowed Twenties chapter 19 . 7/7/2008 Interesting. I want to read more, please update soon! |
Borrowed Twenties chapter 18 . 6/17/2008 Lol, you're keeping me in suspense! I can't wait to see what happens :D Too bad there's not too much Terry in here. But anyway, update soon!(: |
Borrowed Twenties chapter 17 . 6/15/2008 Aww... A hug (: Hope Terry and Jazz get together one way or the other along the way. Can't wait for another update! |
Borrowed Twenties chapter 15 . 5/13/2008 Cool, it's been a long time since I've last saw an update, please update soon if you can! xD The story's been really interesting so far, and I can't wait to read more! |
Chargone chapter 15 . 5/9/2008 wow. been a Long time since i last remember seeing a chapter in this story. heh. you're Still the only person I've come across who can write in the present tense and make it Work. I've come across published novels written like that and they're just ... unreadable. so that's something of an achievement for you :) some interesting deviousness takeing place there, it seems. i probably say this most times, but it will be interesting to see where it leads. Dun Dun Dun! |