I love this quote so muchHarry was a terrifying chibi elf”.

kidding. that would ruin it

my starter is in the fridge

The end was a bit ... bumpy? and aprupt. But overall I enjoyed the story very much and had a lot of fun! It was well written. Please no excuses for english not being your first language. I didnt notice. (Ok, english isnt my first language either, but pffft?!)

I bet that Hermione is the spy.

This entire story is hilarious. I honestly enjoyed how much both Harry and Draco fought against the bond, despite wanting it.
My only complaint is that, for me, I don't care if sweatdrop is a real word or not, it just doesn't work in prose. There are so many ways to express the sentiment better.

I would just like to point out that every time a different person speaks, there should be a new paragraph. This is one of the few grammatical rules with no exceptions.
I have only read the first chapter while typing this, but I am enjoying the premise, and Sirius alive, very much.

*sees the word Demon and realizes the Nazgûl comment wasn't off*

you just made s sasunaru story. harry potter style.

Sasuke is also proof that an uke doesn't have to be weak.

I like to just imagine that Draco making people threaten him whenever Harry's around so he can flirt with him

I died laughing throughout the entire story. Poor Harry lol

Lol! Snape in this fanfic is Adrien Agreste levels of cluelessness!

This was so cute and adorable, and just awwwwwww! I loved it, and I think your English is actually better than quite a lot of native English speakers. It was great.

was odd and interesting but I loved it. I laughed quite a bit.