Your story is phenomenal. it is very detailed and organized i absolutely adored it.

Sweet but not sticky soft but not fluffy simple good things.

This is very nice and decent. Not vulgar at all like many other Bleach fictions.

OMG that is sooooooooo cute! I'm sorry but I don't know how they got together but that's exactly how I would imagine it :) I hope you write another story just as beautiful

i love this story, it's so sweet and i think it captures Hisana's and Byakuya's personalities beautifully! Well done :)

it sucks

dhis story is good keep goinq but im new here soo dont flame mhee while im here

Ah, so romantic. I like the way you listed all his gifts to her. :)

that was really good.. i'm kind jealous of hisana! haha :)

loved it :)

*watery eyed*

i agree. i totally think byakuya is a sweet man who has trouble expressing himself.

the ending is so sad...OH BYAKUYA AND HISANA DESERVE HAPPINESS TOGETHER DARNNIT!

your fan-fiction is near reality, if your going to research more about hisana kuchiki. im not good in english but as the way i undestand kibo-sama describe hisana whose characteristics is like her own little sister rukia, there's is an ongoing debate here on how byakuya met her. kibo-sama describe byakuya on one of his manga as a cold hearted guy, making him too boustful (i dont know how to translate in english but byakuya somekind of "windy arrogant"), it is true that hisana came from one of the poorest sector in rukongai. So if your going to here the debates here, hisana is a strong minded person, i herad one of these day kibo-sama will make a special book for the women in bleach and we just had to wait for that.

sigh... it's so sweet ;;

Hisana and Byakuya were so meant to be together... **

What a sweetheart Byakuya is. /And not once during their short marriage did Kuchiki Byakuya ever regret his decision to romance Hisana./ Aww. Hisana's really lucky.

Haha lovely fic. I still can't get myself to imagine a shy "cutie pie" Byakuya but it was a very sweet stories none the less. ]