Itachi is just misunderstood man

Zuko: (Hearing Naruto's roars) Uncle, what was that?

Iroh: I don't know,(sensing the Nine-tails' chakra) I can feel wrath and blood lust in the air. we have to get out of here!

Sasuke: "No revenge and no power make Sasuke" Something... something!

Sakura: Go crazy?

Sasuke: DON'T MIND IF I DO! (Sasuke goes crazy)

Sakura: Sasuke there you are, are you okay?
Sasuke: GONE! It's all gone! All is gone bye-bye woo, see ya!
Sakura: what happened to you?!
Sasuke: One minute you're fighting your arch rival and suddenly you find yourself sucking down tea with (whispers) Marie and her little sister. (chuckles)
Sakura: I think you've had enough tea for today. let's get you back to camp Sasuke.
Sasuke: DON'T YOU GET IT? YOU SEE THE HAT? I AM MRS. NESBITT. (laughs like a lunatic)
Sakura: SNAP OUT OF IT SASUKE! (she knocks the hat off and slaps his face!)
Sasuke: Er..I..I'm sorry, You we're right! I'm just a little depressed that's all! I..I can get through this, (breaks down) OH, I'M A SHAM!

you forgot to add the quote "Thank you the universe!" from Sokka

They were incense sticks, not thin candles

Otou-san is father, Ototo-san is little brother. Naruto kept on calling Aang dad xD Oh, by the way, Naruto's chakra refills daily so why haven't they just been travelling with Gamabunta instead of by foot?

Leaving Toph tied up like that was hypocritical and cruel and demonstrated they learned nothing at all.

Why can't she just earthbend her way out? With her head if she has to?

-N

What, no mention of the chakra gates that Lee uses?

A proper comparison is quite appropriate when doing this xover.

-N

I hope Yamato rules the Dai Li through fear before Azula gets to... I like it when Yamato rules through fear... :

Also, yay Sasuke! Wonder what's going on with him? The pairings imply he'll end up as a good guy at some point... Sakura going bad is unlikely.

Also yay metalbending! I hope to see some explaining about that letter she gets. We never hear about her parents again that I recall. Was it faked and they stay distant? Or was she cooerces either by her husband at home, or worse, ambushed in Ba Sing Se and the letter misused?...

Regardless, the plot thickens... *ominous*

-N

They didn't come back for Jet. :

-N

info-dump, the chapter.

This fic has an interesting premise but the conversations are incredibly stilted and OOC. There's far too much focus on bringing the characters from the individual series up-to-date on the mechanics of the respective worlds and their super powers. This results in incredibly un-characteristic things like trained shinobi revealing the secrets to the functioning of their villages' most secret jutsu to perfect strangers literally the day they meet them.

as a result, none of the characters feel like themselves or interact in a natural way.

Going to give this fic a miss after a chapter and a half.

If no one has corrected you in any reviews, the correct term that Naruto should be using for Aang would be Aang-otouto-san, atm you're implying that Naruto views Aang as his father (the correct spelling is also otou-san). Excellent read anyways. From almost 8 years in the future

If only it was that easy in the series to get Sasuke to come back!

This story seemed like it would be good but there were a lot of issues with it just in this first chapter. The biggest problems would have to be how the dimension jump was written and the meeting of avatar and Naruto was written, they both seemed very rushed and poorly described, i find it difficult to enjoy a story so rushed because of how bad the conversations are its just so lazy of the author to write like this.