nice

Nice story,

Bit rushed here and there, but pretty fun plot.

Interesting way how you kept referring to the characters corresponding to the bodies they inhabited. And very funny interactions between Drakken and Shego in Kim and Ron's body and their respective families.

Keep up the good writing,

reader101w

Great story and funny to the very end! You should write another one this that would rock!

Very funny Ch!

Very good ch! This would make a very great ep! Too bad they did't for the show or somthing like it!

a great story, right to the end!

a little bit confusing but good anyway

Great story, and very funny! Just one thing: it would have been a little easier to understand (especially since they are cross-gender switches) if you had used the name of the person inside the body instead of the person who's body it was. E.g., when Drakken and Shego do their criminal stuff, if you write them as "Drakken" and "Shego" instead of "Kim" and "Ron," it would be easier to understand. Also you could do the same thing with the gender pronouns.

Other than that it was absolutely hilarious! I especially love the part where Ron keeps asking why they cancelled the "Ron Factor." Excellent job!

Numbuh 212

Thanks. LOL! I loved when 'Draco' & 'Shego' kissed. Too funny. Thanks I enjoyed the story. The ending was a little too fast for me, but what do I know!

Question: Why did Draco pick Kim's body?

Figures Rufjs would be able to identify Ron in Shego's body since he was able to identify Shego in Ron's body.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

Dear Kim's 1 fan

Good chapter; has good gags and exchanges.

It was funny that Rufus knew who Ron was, even though Ron was in shego's body; and Ron's remarks and speculations are amusing and so in character. And it was a relief (Mostly for Kim and Ron) that Ron and Kim managed to defeat Dr. D and Shego and get switched back to normal.

I want to thank you for mostly toned-down the bad word in chapter 3, and for indicating that swearing is not proper.

As for the wholesome standards on chapter 4, this is what I have to say.

Some of the details are questionable; but if you change the ratting of your of your fanfic from a K to a K, I won't make a big deal about them.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

great story, i enjoyed reading it.

Dear Kim's 1 fan

Pretty good chapter. Has good dialogue, has feeling, some tenseness, and a touch of humor.

The characters are very well designed; Bonnie is in character, and I enjoyed the interaction between her and Drakken and Shego (who are in the bodies of Kim and Ron); Drakken and Shego are done well too, it was amusing when the cat almost got out of the bag, and their thought processes are good, and their reaction with the families of Kim and Ron.

Kim and Ron are good too; boy, being wanted by the authorities; very complicated.

My only complaint is a swear word used, partly because the swear word was used in an improper way, and because this story is rated K. It would mean a lot to me if you replaced the swear word with something slang, like dang or darn.

Other then that, there is nothing offensive.

I hope this review has a good influence on you. God bless.

Data Seeker

ROFLOL! Its geat. I wonder why draco swwitched with Kim/ Humm? Anyway I think ‰on as Shego is eally funny. 'She's' going native giving ot kisses. Where wwill it lead. Also, the thoguht of the villians having to look through photo alubums or put up with siblings is brilliant! PLS finish! Also, i wonder if 'Kim' & 'Ron' will have a 'teenage' romance? LOL! Many good touches - I loved it when the good guys were led away as villians with"Kim' & 'Ron' gloating!

Well this shows Drakken DOES have some backbone as for Shego, well at least she got out of her "torture" so to speak.

Damn, things just don't seem to go right for Kim and Ron lately huh?

Invader Johnny Signing Off.