| Reviews for The Legend of Zelda: Empire |
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Hjkryan chapter 1 . 11/17/2019 That relates to guest on 8 01 2017 as well |
Hjkryan chapter 1 . 11/17/2019 Guest on 5 28 15: Dude, shut up! You don’t even have an account, you have no right to tell this author that their story is terrible! This is one of my favourite stories |
Guest chapter 24 . 5/18/2019 *Where our Riders go, we will go, said Saphira. It was the first time Link had ever heard her voice. He assumed she was speaking to them both, because Eragon seemed to hear it too.* Except, you know, when she already spoke to Link. When he was freeing Saphira from her cell. But whatever. Little mistakes happen in fics with long gaps between chapters. |
ShadowLeafeon33 chapter 19 . 8/21/2018 **Cough cough Brisingr cough cough..** |
Raphaim chapter 11 . 3/30/2018 yeah he wouldn't swear fealty. he'd probably swear aid to nasuada against galbatorix |
God damnit chapter 11 . 7/31/2017 You sir, are an idiot. I don't care how well you think this fits in with the plot, I don't care how you think this is the right move to help the Varden, none of that matters. Link, is a KNIGHT OF HYRULE! He can't swear fealty to someone else! If you were a King/Queen, and you discovered that your most trusted knight had just sworn himself to some random ass rebellions leader, how the hell would you take that?! You wouldn't be thinking "Oh yeah, it's his choice." You'd be thinking "He just betrayed his duty to me." What happens now if Zelda tells Link "Hey I need item A for some reason." But Nasuada says "Oh no actually I need item A, so give it to me instead" He swore to obey both of them. He's fucking trapped between two oaths. Congrats Link, you are a god damn dumbass. Also, have you ever heard of a knight of one kingdom swearing fealty to someone else?! No! Because they know that isn't ever gonna happen, and that at best they'll be thrown out, at worst maybe tried for treason. This is such an incredibly weighty decision that he didn't seem to think about much. Took his dragons advice and then was like "Oh, ok. I'll do that then" This just makes no sense. I mean Link should know how much this means. |
Wait what chapter 3 . 7/31/2017 They know of his exploits in Hyrule... But they didn't know he's Hylian? I'm a little confused here. Shouldn't that have been a basic part of those tales? You know, his race? I guess you'll hopefully explain soon. |
Eeveecat1248 chapter 32 . 7/30/2017 Now I really want to see everyone in Hyrule's reaction to Link's return. |
Rosalind2013 chapter 32 . 12/21/2016 Truly well-rounded story. You have an artful way of writing, and your attention to detail is amazing! Thanks for writing the crossover I was looking for! The quality of this story is on par with Paolini's work, which was a very pleasant surprise. Also, Link's personality was super sassy, which I loved! I've always detected a certain amount of sass in him, so I think it's awesome to see that someone else thinks so too! :D ~Rosalind |
Koal chapter 6 . 9/13/2016 I would of chosen Volgeria, did you know he was Link's pet dragon in the Manga version of OOT? |
Astronauts chapter 3 . 8/30/2016 This is hard to believe. Like, sure Link is a Hero, but he was pushed to be so by destiny and his own nature. Now random people he has never met, who only tell him an extract of their history (something you only added for the readers, not Link) and then somehow know all about him, probably by mind reading, are sending him off on a mission in a country he's never been in, against foes he doesn't even know the name of. This is buuuuuuuuuull. |
Guest chapter 32 . 8/12/2016 I like how this fic used necromancy with human souls and in the books published after it's revealed that the vault of souls used dragon souls but I do think that the master sword would go through galbatorix's wards |
qwerty19 chapter 32 . 9/21/2015 I remember reading this amazing story years ago, and loving all of it. The writing style was fantastic, the imagery was beautiful, and the unforgettable final battle. Now, after making an account, I came back to read it again, and I somehow loved it even more. I'm glad I have that account, because I can finally 'Favorite' this piece of Fanfiction Gold! |
Sianna Scale chapter 32 . 6/1/2015 Wonderful story, a sequel would be awesome! |
Guest chapter 3 . 5/28/2015 Your right sucks! You screwed up Link and Hyrulians are elves. You wrote Link as if he were human and he is NOT human. Either get the facts straight or stop writing altogether. You butchered Link as a character and this story is HORRIBLE! |