I'll not ask for a repeat, but it was very nicely done.

I'm glad that Yuna took Auron and Rikku's realtionship the way she did. She could of been all mad at him and start to (attempt) to beat him up while yelling stuff like "YOU SICK PREVERTED MAN!"

Well-written, and a bittersweet ending. I enjoyed this immensely.

cant wait till you update THIS story

Well, now, i have to say i was confused in the beginning, but it may have been because it's been so long since i read Time After Time. I was wondering, does that have anything to do with a Detective Conan song by the same name? About the lemon you put in it, i have to agree that it was rushed and really wasn't believable, but that's not your fault, after reading Soldier of Spira, every other Aurikku seems faulty in comparison. Keep to the building of the relationship, and don't feel pressured to include lemon if you don't want to because your aurikkus are just fine the way they are.

aw...poor Gining! You feel so ashamed now:) that's so cute!

ahem...anyway, i really liked how you brought things to a close. after the other story i wondered what would happen when they all saw each other on the pilgrimage again. tidus was so confused heh heh, that was funny. i liked the interaction between rikku and brother.

Now as for the lemony goodness, i was super excited to see that you wrote some! Excellent! Wasn't that hard? It took me a long ass time to write the one I did. Well, the first time i read the scene, i could feel that you were kind of uncomfortable writing it. I guess it stood out to me because I have read so much of your writing I could tell the barely there shift in the writing. So I read it a second time, and saw that it was in true Gining fashion. Romantic and angsty at the same time. With a little more practice you can be smutting it up! But you're great at what you do, don't let us pressure you:)

Thanks for telling me about your updates, so far my alerts have been acting okay, so i did actually get the alerts. Go work on your origianl stuff now. Thanks for throwing us a bone!