Thank you, and your beta, for this great story, i loved every word of it! So glad i stumbled across it

A brilliant story! Novel plot, rich characters, and some toothsome words. Thank you for sharing. ;)

Man, these chapters are gutting! (I heart it.)

Uh oh, Dean. Watch out for Fergus and his merry band of skeevy researchers!

Wow, really crazy - Sam's condition. I had been thinking that Melanie transported Sam and he sustained internal injuries in the process (kind of like splotching). She mentioned another person (Eamon?); maybe Melanie's ability killed him and that's why she committed suicide. But maybe the mystery person was a baby with the same pulmonary condition as Sam. Really interesting.

Also, doctor Fergus is creepy. Yuck.

It's really strong how you capture the primal terror and insanity of trains passing within inches of the brothers.

Very intriguing premise. The prose flows well and there's a lot of evocative sensory input without repetition. I look forward to the rest. :)

Love this story

Thank you for understanding people can enjoy a story but for whatever reason don't always review. My health often keeps me from reviewing and on those days I need the stories most of all. However, today is a good day and this was an excellent story. It had a full plot,interesting new charcters and a neat mythos. Thanks

I loved this story! Very original idea! Keep writing :)

Wow. Exceptional work here. Frightening, claustrophobic, tense, and did I mention scary? Great character work, excellent ghost / spook, and fantastic resolution. I must say the conclusion with Sam berating the doctor was quite satisfactory. Great story. Be proud of yourself for this one.

Great story! Love so badly hurt Sammy and Dean in full-on protective, do-anything big brother mode. And what a unique twist on the spirit's motivation. Cautionary warning tale of what happens when one becomes too obsessed with a TV show? Not that *I* would know anything about that, LOL!

Wow, this is one of the most amazing stories I have read, brilliantly written and a wonderful and complex plot, it had me on the edge of my seat.
A real gem of a story and a definite fave.

Wow. Just wow. The plot is terrific and you capture the characters really well. Again, wow. AMAZING job done.

Loved from beginning to end. I had never had a chance to finish this story so glad I found it again and read through the end... although I have just gotten to this page still need to read it.