Went searching for a good Ouran story and lucky me! I found this one. I love KyoKao stories and you've written such a nice take on their dynamic. I'd like to include this in Kyoya's Notebook so unless you object, you can find it there for others to enjoy. Nice work!

This is beautiful. Well done!

God, im hooked. Towards the end, i was so scared because i thought you only wrote that one chapter and i was thinking, "they're not going to leave you with just this, are they?" Thank you for having four more chapters. I shall read them now.

Sigh... my heart is melting.

Everyone's Happy! ...Except Tamaki :) Haha, that's all I can say to that statement.
But really! It was so depressing in the actual story when Hikaru and Kaoru started drifting apart! I almost stopped reading the manga completely!
And Kyoya and his self-denial in the second chapter... oh... that was just... :)
By the way! You're like... the second author/person that I've actually bothered reviewing to, normally I don't. But this was just so... and the whole 'reaching out' towards others and I'm just like... wow... this is giving me MOMENTS! Grrr... I blame you and your amazing writing skills... now I'm going to be going around randomly fangirling and people are going to be staring at me and my mum's going to think I'm crazy again :T
When Mori was all like, "lol, I like Kaoru too," I was all like, "nooooooooo!" Kyoya and Kaoru must be together now! There is no other way! You're my favourite character (actually I think it might be more Mori and Kaoru but whatever) Mori! But so help me, get in the way of their love and I will hate you forever! D:
I actually don't... crazy-ship anything from Ouran, I mean, Tamaki x Haruhi is cute, but that;s about it. And I don't all go "squee! They're having a MOMENT!" or whatever. But with this, I kind of was.
Sorry for the crazy-long review, I'll summarise my feelings about this right now, and leave yuo to do more worthwhile things with your life than read my review... how I feel about this fanfic: kjfbgksdbfksdbfksdbfjsbfjhbs jhbsdjfbjfbsjhdbfibfkjenkekb djhb!HB!HB!B!B!KBKJ!BKHBVJGCCJHBJHBjh!bj!bjhbjhbjqhbJH1BjbJH1BJhb!J1bJHBJHB!JHBJBjbkbdkerjnfksjbgjersvb!JHb !gv bh! XD
I think I did a fairly good job of explaining my feels, don't you? :)

Aw man Mori's feeling weren't real, but thats okay cause its more in character for Mori to do something like that. Excellent plot!

I like how Mori's a rival! More love for Kaoru!

Simply Brilliant. Thanks for sharing.

3 hahaha, he's a horny teen afterall. i was worried he was a robot. thanyou

aww... so sweet... :)

Awh this story was absolutely adorable! :D

are you going to write more?

thats was so amazing :) oh my god i acctually loved it! XD haha my favourite couple :) and Mori helping out... XD anyway, well done it was awsome, i have no complaints except by the end i was nearly crying of happines... :P haha lol. but ye, good one :D

I loved this fic. I particularily liked how it was Kyouya who reached for Kaoru first. I've seen fics where its the opposite or where he goes towards Kaoru but doesn't really reach or crave for him. I think you showed Kyouya's observant nature extremely well. The way you make the characters act is very realistic. The story was really interesting and I was looking forward to knowing what came next. You did a great job! I'll be looking forward to reading more fics from you if you have the time and inspiration to write again!

I love KyouxKaoru so please keep writing stories about them