Ah, a story from the "i'm gonna interpret it forever coz it's just too cool". Saying a few words, leaving place for imagination, giving only a vibrat feeling to the reader - in my opinion it's far, far more badass than descripted stuff. I loved this story! The Mello you've written, and the Matt - those guys are like that. And nobody can convince me otherwise.

I love this. The descriptions were awesome, and I could picture Mello's face and Matt's slump perfectly. Mello was so Mello...acting like that. Ah, I really do love this.

Lovely. Nice to see Mello not give a damn about anything and do something for fun. xD Not to mention I love a good MattMello friendship fic. Don't see enough of those around. :) Awesome job, and keep up the great work.

Sora

XDD Love! Them! :D Sweetie-pies... There was plenty of wonderuful imagery and hilarious dialogue in that, thank you. Those are my two favorite things in a story. Especially when characters make funny side-notes on the conversation... :D

Loved it, reading more. Well, soon anyways, I have friends arguing that I have to take care of first... '

Grr. And I've been trying so hard not to read fanfiction for a while. Why the hell do you just have to be that fricken' good!

It's so hard to find a decent Mello fic without him being bitter. I think I kind of worship you now. Run off with me?

That was hilarious! Leave it up to Mello to pull off something like that just because he "felt like it".

Did I mention that I absolutely love your style of writing? The whole "interrupted thoughts" thing gives the story a greater sense of authenticity, at least to me.

By the way, one question:

"Back when he was a kid he’d vowed to get one out of L and Near.

That day, with L—best day ever.

The only time he’d ever seen Near look surprised was probably the worst."

Like the other reviewer asked, did you have something in mind when your wrote that? I'm curious now...

That was vauge and really amusing. You did Mello and Matt very well. I loved this.

That was so wonderful and funny and vague, I read this a few months ago before I had an account here and came back to read it again and wonder if that first time, I actually got it.

Funny, I don't think I did. I don't think I do.

Don't fix it.

-TCA

Holy crap! I loved this! Mello and Matt are my favorite characters, and your portrale of them was great. I love Matt's reaction.

I enjoyed it. :D You write Matt and Mello very well. I'll probably read more stuff of your's later. :)

So, in between writing my NaNo atrocity, I've been reading through your fiction, Emily, and. And. Please beat me over the head the next time we talk, kay? :D alfjs Your writing. I. This. Love. (Coherency is gone. It has taken wing. Excuse this crappy review.)

Your Matt and your Mello are fabulous. Together, they are even more fabulous. Ugh. UGH.

Yeah. We need to talk again soon, so I can shower you with praise that makes sense (sort of). :D

Oh, I lied. I lied lied lied so badly.

I'm not all reviewed out. I can't be, because apparently I wasn't all fanfictioned out, and if I can still read fanfiction then I can certainly still review. If that made any sense at all. Stop being so good at writing these things.

On another note, HELL YES for brewhouses in my home state.

"Mello was thinking at the moment how the slanted script M at the beginning of her name on that little ‘Hello my name is’ tag was somehow pathetic and ultimately unappealing." BWAHAHA. Oh god, I love that part. LOVE IT.

That description of Mello's sex appeal nearly killed me. It was so good, it kind of almost hit me like I actually was BEING HIT BY MELLO'S SEX APPEAL RIGHT HERE IN MY CHAIR. What immense power of description you possess. Christ.

Oh dear sweet god and that ending rocks. I want to cry at how much I am enjoying reading through all your stuff. CRY, with the sheer joy and pleasure of it all. And at how hysterical it is because it's making me laugh too and my eyes are watering.

Mello's a physical creature- that's so true, and you captured it really well. And again, I totally love the way you write. (I love how you portray Matt, as well.)

WoW! Saw this posted ages ago in the MelloMatt LJ community, and I remembered printing it off because I loved it so much. I had no idea you were the author so I'm glad I stumbled into this on (one of the better points of my day; thanks for that).

This is great. I love the Mello and Matt partners in crime thingymajiggerishness... I love made up words. :D