holyshit it's cute ...sasuke being jealous because naruto wouldn't beat him up omg

lol! its a good way to end it after all.

Great job!

I'm confused as to why you started out with the actual story but then throughout every thing else, it was just the future. I'm sorry, its just they do this in naruto to and they always drag out things and have long flashbacks and its just kinda annoying but this is just weirding me out cause I was waiting to see what happened next in the actual story. Like where Toppuu first appeared.

I know this has nothing to do with your fic (Which is very amusing and funny by the way!) but, other then me, I didn't know there where other people that clumsy, though to be fair to myself I usually walk into walls, and doors, and counter, and tables, and honestly a lot of things now that I think about. Plus sometimes I just, lose all balance and start falling over...

This story is too hilarious

I kinda ship Kakashi and Iruka a little too

Ah i have like... 5? older sisters but they are all older than me and ive never ''really'' met them so ive basically been an only child...it is kinda lonely and i can tell the difference 'cuz a few years ago i made a friend who is a lil younger than meh and i see her as a lil sister... i often call her imouto [little sister in japanese] and sometimes she'll reply back with nee-san/onee-san/nee-chan/onee-chan [big sister] so ya... its a bit hard to explain the exact feeling but it's definately a great feeling/experience

Wow

Lmfao

Cute

Holy shot

Great job

Hehehehe

Aw