Gran trabajo.
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Great job.

Buen capitulo.
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Good chapter.

Pobre Dib.
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Poor Dib.

Gaz no debería tratar a su hermano así.
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Gaz shouldn't treat her brother that way.

No, Dib, no! This chapter is very sad but i like it.

Hello!
This is sad, is beatifull. I love it.

i loved it. :,3

Just kill me, why don't you?

No, but seriously, that was awesome. you got these great moments of emotion that made me tingle. keep refining your craft, and you'll go far!

So sad, but bravo on writing this.

Sincerely, peace

I. Love. This. Story...

It was really really awsome, and in perfect (2 me) character. I cried so much... Im a Dib lover -_-.

I Love how Membrane was there 4 Gaz, nd how Gaz relized all her brother ever wanted was 4 her 2 be happy.

I was actually hopeing 4 Zim 2 come along and comfront her in her time of need. Some ZAGR you know? But it was still awsome.

Thanks 4 a wonderful story, hope 2 read more from you

I. Love. This. Story...

It was really really awsome, and in perfect (2 me) character. I cried so much... Im a Dib lover -_-.

I Love how Membrane was there 4 Gaz, nd how Gaz relized all her brother ever wanted was 4 her 2 be happy.

I was actually hopeing 4 Zim 2 come along and comfront her in her time of need. Some ZAGR you know? But it was still awsome.

Thanks 4 a wonderful story, hope 2 read more from you

This story is that moving, beautiful kind of sad and depressing. This was amazing. :;)

I really loved this story... made me cry, but it's so beautiful. Definitely a favorite )

i cryed.

It's so beautiful.

I read this in school so it was funny when others staried at me.

but that is so hartwarming maybe now i will be nicer and more caring towards my sister.

Griz: What is wrong with those kids?

Jau: I never liked Dib anyways

Rel: HOW CAN HOSE KIDS BE SO CRUEL? good story though.

Griz:My sis is right, it is good.

Jau: yeah, good. *walks through a door with Zim's picture on it.*