Nice. Great characterization.

sweet

I liked this story a lot. It made me just kind of smile, you know, in a serene way. I can actually picture everything that you wrote, down to the very last word.

It was really well written! Great job!

I think you got Teal'c exactly right. Excellent story,thank you!

What episode is this based off of? Shouldn't that have been put in the disclaimer?

Hi.

I've read...pretty much every Atlantis fic of yours I've found, on LJ and on here, but for some reason I've never got round to commenting...I fail like that.

I just wanted to let you know how much I love them; the way you write Sheppard and Mckay, and all of them to be honest, just seems perfect. Plus, I'm a complete sucker for some good Shep whump...I'm slightly addicted to it, but am still too terrified to post any of mine, aha.

I've read your work over and over, and it never seems to get old to me for some reason...and I just thought I'd say how much I love it.

:)

This was a great story. I rather liked the 'he cheated' line, seemed very Ronon.

Good story. I liked the first chapter best.

Nice. Liked it. Interesting to read something that's in Teal'c's point of view.

Interesting story.. I'd definitely love to read it from Daniel & Cam's POV as well as some others like McKay.. Great! Many stars!

I really enjoyed this story

Probably the 4th or 5th time I've read this but it still amazes me!

Absolutely love the characterisations and the emotive language.

Just beautifully written and still hoping for more *nudges*

:D

Great! So where are the others? C'mon, I'm waiting here. Oh, and write one from Vala, too, if only so she can analyze Teyla. *laughs* There I go, bossing you around. Sorry about that, I just really enjoyed this one.

It was nice to see things from Teal'c's POV. He's the stoic of the universe, so a lot of people sort of disregard him. I know there are some who compare Ronon and Teal'c to one another a lot, and it was nice to read something that clearly pointed out their difference, which is huge. Can't wait till we see the two of them together in Midway, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Ronon vs. Teal'c would be quite... interesting...

Pretty frickin' sweet, m'dear. I actually don't want to know the torture story, since little bits and pieces come out in the aftermath. It suits the story better this way, actually.

I'm looking forward to seeing the other POV's, if you still feel like writing them. :)

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