Your last comment on this stiry was two years ago. I haven't read it...not yet. But before anything, I feel like you deserve a thank you.
After all these years, you are still the only Air Author too get his story in the 100k range. It's been 9 years... but even still, thank you.

Wow that's one major cliffhanger you left us with for 7 years ;P
I suddenly got the strong want of rereading FaS after all these years, and tho it probably won't ever be completed, I'm soooo curious on how you were planing to end it :3 you probably won't even see this review but on the offhand that you do, I really love your story and I think your an amazing writer! It got noticeable in your authornote in the last chapters that you were doubting your ability to write, but you really shouldn't be so hard on yourself! In general my standard for what I read is way higher than 7 years ago, and I was a bit scared that I build up FaS in my head over the years but I really wasn't disappointed! I still love it! I wish you luck in whatever life's taken you nowadays! Maybe I'll be back in 7 years from now to reread it again3

UPDATE!UPDATE!UPDATE!
PLEASE WE NEED A UPDATE!

plz make new chapter
we won't be mad even if you update now!

You know CV, I've been reading fanfiction for a very, very long time. More than ten years of hours upon hours on this website and a few others reading predominantly slash pairings and giggling like the mad fangirl I am. And you know what? As much as I love my slash pairings, as many as I've read, this story right here is easily the best I've ever read. I couldn't even begin to describe all the right buttons this pushes for me, but I'll try, if only because you deserve the praise.

For one, I prefer slow burn fics, and the more chapters the better, and the longer it takes the two characters to realize what they're feeling and come to terms with it, all the more hoo hay. I especially delight in fics where the characters are kept IC up to their sexuality and how any straight male would react to that being challenged. I don't believe it to be something that should be ignored, but it often times is, or breezed over quickly and unconvincingly. You handle all of this naturally and with a fluidity that makes me dissolve into a mass of satisfied goo. And after that? The easy flow of the story, the attention to the characterization, the details, descriptions, tone, the inclusion and importance to the side characters and their effect to the storyline...again, I could go on. I can't even...I love this fic. I looooove this fic. This fic sets a fire to my love for IkkixKazu that despairs my spirit because this thing hasn't been updated in four years and anything else I read with these two will always seem...less...in comparison.

I seem to be writing a short essay, so 'm going to go by saying that if you do read this one day, I hope you're doing well in life and that you could find the time someday to finish this beautifully written story. You have my gratitude for this gift and the inspiration you've granted me to become a better writer.

With nothing but well wishes,

saYUS

Just amazing.

I absolutely love this fic, no words. I've liked this pairing for long so this is easily my favorite fic, since honestly, there isn't enough stuff about them out there! This is the kind of story that makes you go AHH I DON'T WANT THIS TO END. I especially love how you wrote kazu it makes me grin so much.

I hope you are doing fine and still write? Since your fics are some great stuff, i'm loving em enough to save these on my computer haha! Thank you!

.GOD! I just read through all 29 chapters and I've never read something so amazing. Your language is varied and interesting, a few words or phrases were a bit overused though. I've never read the manga and have only seen a few episodes of the anime but even so it was still LOADS of fun to read. Kazu were in a lot of danger many times but never felt like a damsel in distress and all of the characters story development felt natural and real. You took up things from the original series that could cause plot holes, for example Ikki and Simca, but you handled it well. I other words, you are GREAT,this story is AWESOME and you should keep ad it!

Please tell me that there will be more? I have fallen head over heels in love with this story.

This is absolutely amazing. Please continue soon, and I have to say, stop doubing yourself. You just keepnsaying your chapters aren't good, but they are! I know people who woukd kill to write like you!

I love Folly and Sin! It has drama, romance, action, etc.
I wont lie, a numerous amount of times did this story have me on the edge of my seat and squealing. The characters are well written to.

I do so hope that you continue this story. I absolutely loved the tortured Kazu chapter. 3

Now where do I even start? It's been a long time since I first time found this. It's not everyday I find a story that keeps me up till early morning because I simply can't stop reading.

There was many nice quotable things and I have re-read this like 3 times! The way you wrote about the characters was great&lovely. And I honestly can easily re-read this later again, that's how much I liked it haha. This is one of my favorite fanfictions ever (especially since I adore this pairing, but it's fandom is now nonexistent).

So I had to drop by again and this time actually say THANK YOU for writing such amazing story. I do hope you someday finish this, but I'm happy to have read what there is.

Truly this is a masterpiece at work.

It's a doggie-dog world and Ikki's the doggiest. Your character analysis hits home; from the insecurities of Kazu, to the recuperation of broken hearts. It is a story which entails the inner struggles of growing up, and acceptance. A transition from friends to something more.

And I salute you for sharing such a story to us readers.

No constructive criticism here.

It’s been a year, but I still wish you the best with this story (and the rest of your upcoming stories, if any).

Sooooooo gooooooooooooooood! update soon.