A masterful one-shot. I loved how you handled Muraki's thoughts, and ruled out the seductiveness in him. I think it's realistic that he's jealous of the growing bond between Tsuzuki and Hisoka, also the words about Tsuzuki never actually opening up to him was an amazing idea too, but really sad. I really loved the comparison with the roses, and the ending, like for how long had Muraki watched over Tsuzuki like that... O.O It's just creepy and obsessive. I loved this one-shot!

Awesome. This is just beautiful-I loved it!

oh...my...god...that was truly a beautiful piece of work. Muraki's personality was so perfect, it was like he was standing in the room with me! oh great now ill have nightmares! lol. i could almost see muraki being a little jealous of what hisoka and tsuski have...hm. yes i totally agree with you though that muraki is a very eccentric and evil being! And whats with his eye? its all bulging out of his head! wow that guy creeps me out too! i love his character though! if you ever watched teen titans before, muraki reminds me of slade! i dunno, just because he has his calm moments then he goes insane...oh what do YOU think will happen in the last manga? i think the author is gonna bring out this mysterious ukyo into the story! hell, she was probably the one that saved him in the 8th one! can i get a second opinion?

but please continue this soon!

Oh, my... How phenomenal that was! You write Muraki so very well, and seem to have a firm grasp on how EVIL(but yet so cultured:)) he really is. I like. I like lots. Is there a sequel in the making? I certainly hope so...

Very, very good. Compelling, interesting, breathtaking. Personally, Muraki's my favorite, so I'm a little biased, but only a little...

For someone who thinks he's pure evil, and obviously doesn't like him that much, you've done an EXCELLENT job on capturing who Muraki is.

The concept of this story is simply fantastic. Amazing. The last few lines are very chilling, very realistic.

The one thing I have to point out is your grammar. In a few places, you replaced the period with commas, and missed a few words, but that's okay. This story is just so good that I've gotten over it. And every single writer makes mistakes.

Truly a wonderful piece. I enjoyed it throughly.

~Crypt~

Very nice story; very Muraki. Despite someone who doesn't seem to have much of a compassion for him, you really were able to pull off his character quite well, and put enough effort into it to make it a good read. Nicely done, and I really like the title too; it's so...enchanting, and eye-catching, for a title. _

This is by far the best fic about Muraki I have ever read. It's so good. Thank you so much for writting it! I have to ask, are you a professional writer? haha! I hope I will get to read more of your writtings in the future!

really nicely written...

yes, muraki is the encarnation of evil and I hate him.. but, if we take a close look at his past... the cause of his evilness is his half brother, of course it can't justify all the bad things that he has commited.. but... deep down he's just a lost soul...

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Aww...such a great POV! Awesome,...you really did a good job on Muraki. X3

Me like... )

I command thee to write a sequel!... *whispers* Pwease? ._.

And you weird people! *points at some commenters* T_T How can you say what you say? It's HISOKA that ruins it all! Everytime Muraki's so close, Hisoka comes interrupting! _

I feel alone in this world... Nobody else is agreeing with me~! (Everybody goes on and on about luffin' Hisoka.)

MURAKI is the best! D *laughs ebilly*

*huggles ficcy*

I love this thing :) What a great take on Muraki- you got the bad ass jerkface down perfectly! Such a neato thingy... write more!

Ooh, how wonderfully creepy! You did a good job writing Muraki's point of view! _

_ I like. Too bad I didn't actually find it on June 19th since that's my birthdate.

WAI! Muraki is so cool in a sadistic, torturous way! XD Heh heh...I just love reading things about Muraki...:P He and Tsuzuki are great together!

Oh god this story was great! I love how you wrote Muraki's point of view ... he's so scary (but I'm a HUGE Muraki and Tsuzuki fan P), I really hope you do write a sequel and not leave us hanging on 'What happens to Tsuzuki? Does Muraki finally get what he wants?' Please write a sequel!