Me gusta mucho tu historia pero el final no mucho me hubiera gustado que vivieran muchos años junto a sus hijos

Cristina Pacheco

...omg...they all died...ah...but such is life, eh?

This is a very well put together story. I loved reading it!
Many thanks for including the web address to direct readers here after starting the story on Dokuga :)

Truly awesome story, great plot, great flow. One of the best I've read defiantly a favorite and well worth a second or third read.

This was such a lovely story. Magnificent. I really enjoyed reading it. Well done!

I absolutely love your story! I made me cry! It is so realistic and... I just can't put it into words. Congratulations on being a great author and can't wait to red more of your works.

Megan1339

Waahh its over but so greatly done

i love the story but i never want to read it again it is just to sad.

I cried in almost every chapter. It was such a sad story, but i loved it and am kinda upset that it ended. It was well written and the ending was just right, though it would have been better a little happier.

I loved the story but it was just so sad...

I... LOVE... IT!11

wow such an amazing story I can't tell you how many times I cried.

no dont put sango and koga together.

That was a great sotry. I loved how you ended it, sad but sweet. Great job.

that was the best, i cried at the end it was so sad, keep writing.