Fun fact: Janaff is older than Ulki.

Anyway, awesome story. I like the amount of character you give to everyone.
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yeah a new chapter \o/

i like this story, i like your writing style

sorry, but i'm not good in writing reviews

Poor Janaff ;.;

I hope you continue this story, because I really really like it.

I was pretty sure Janaff was older than Ulki...

But whatever, I found the story very interesting.

This is a really good story, I really like it. Please continue it soon. Will Keer have a bigger role in the story, and will the girl come back? Please update soon! :)

Oh, you have no idea how much this amused me. I kept grinning like a loon. Best parts by far: "If you are going to be the king’s ‘eyes,’ you could at least tie your hair back. Ashera knows how much trouble it will cause later on." Also, reyson smacking Janaff in the face with wet hair and the last line of that first chapter. :D

Col! This was awsome! continue with this storie.

It's pretty good. Keep it up.

I LOVE IT! Where could Tibarn have rushed off so hastily after his coronation? Hmm...

I love the references to Janaff's inexperience, but the beginning is a bit confusing at first. I had to read it a few times to get it straight.

All in all, awesome chapter and I can't wait for an update.