| Reviews for Underneath this Smile |
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   JamesWithWitchyLils chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 This story really should have a trigger warning |
| capuza chapter 19 . 12/7/2014 Ugh. Eww. I just can't stand and understand what I am reading where Lily's father who is a muggle can enter Hogwart, the teachers didn't do anything when it was clear that Lily needed help. Uggh... I just though to keep reading but I am done reading! The more I read the more stupid it is. |
| Bellanu421 chapter 30 . 6/16/2014 I just skipped down to say I am done reading! |
| Bellanu421 chapter 27 . 6/16/2014 I almost feel like abandoning reading. This just gets stupider and stupider... |
| Bellanu421 chapter 20 . 6/16/2014 I find it absolutely stupid that Dean can get into Hogwarts. Muggles cant find Hogwarts! Also,very stupid, again, that Dumbledore wouldn't do anything to help Lily when it is obvious she has an abusive father. Sirius ran away in fifth year, right? |
| Mairi Le Fay chapter 9 . 4/18/2014 I loved this chapter. So awesome how Lily finally let her rebellious side peek through at the end. Go Lily! |
| PadfootFanatic chapter 27 . 9/14/2013 James has hazel eyes. |
| TheOnlyAndOne chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 Ps. I LOVE your music taste! |
| TheOnlyAndOne chapter 1 . 5/2/2013 Hey! I simply love your story! I like how you twist it! I would just want to hear if you think about writing a sequel? -Wether you do or not, please PM me: TheOnlyAndOne (cant find my password, so I guess I am not logged in right now) I hope you do;-) I look forward to a message from you3 |
| j.a.m.i.z chapter 31 . 12/8/2012 This was so much darker than the usually story I read, but I have to say it is one of my favorites. It was so beautifully written, I fell in love with it. I'm in desperate need for more, but is there no sequel? Please please please post it if there is! |
| emorley chapter 31 . 4/22/2012 please write a sequel! |
| The Exiled Princess chapter 31 . 7/17/2011 this was honestly probably the best story i have read on this sight. i hope you eventually do post the sequel |
| Lily-Evans-James-Potter chapter 1 . 4/7/2011 I. NEED. THE. SEQUEL! you are such an amazing writer and I thank you for this amazing story and continue with you other one as well! Really I love it. I want lily to stop being so stupid and just love James! Ahhh! Well I get it and I'm sure you have it all planned. Much love |
| bertney1006 chapter 31 . 2/13/2011 WAHHHH Dx this story was intense.. O: like intense times a billion X_X |
| bertney1006 chapter 23 . 2/12/2011 dannggggg theyre all messed up X_X |
