fantastic! very well written in both style and keeping them all in character. i also really like how you brought the battle system to real life.

Hey, I like it! It's good. Definitely intriguing.

Hm, I guess that your Lifetime Wellness class is good for something... writing FanFics! _ lol.

Interesting story! How far along are you in the game? We just started ours yesterday, and are at the point where Vaan, Balthier, and Fran get captured and thrown in the dungeon... I didn't want to stop playing!