I love it. It is a beautiful and well-constructed poem.

EvadneNyx

Oh my goodness! That poem made me cry! It was so beautiful. Wonderful job.

Now I am crying.

I don't cry easily.

Nice. beautiful.

poetry.

Wow, that's awesome. I totally understand from reading where you put the poem in place. It was where Tristan fighting the Saxon leader isn't it? Amazing poem, I liked it a lot!

A heart-wrenching poem. Tristran would listen to his hawk as a friend listens to a friend, but not this time. If only this time he had. All the elements of his fight are there. Well written, well done. Thank you.