This is such a terrific fiction. You kept me enthralled throughout the story. This is the 2nd time I have read it. Have you ever thought to develop the romance between Clark & Lee? It is so good to move beyond the Clark/Lois/Richard triangle.

Loved this. It was hard to put down. Beautiful story.

I just want you to know how remarkably beautiful your story is. It has made me an emotional wreck. I love Aileen and can relate to her in so many ways! Please tell me this story isn't on hiatus because that would just be cruel considering what a treasure this story is so far. Keep writing! You are so talented!

This story is splendid so far really can’t wait to see more so please update soon.

What this story is fantastic can’t wait for more so please update soon.

What a marvelous story so far can’t wait to see more so please update soon.

This story is really amazing! I hope you finish it :)

Fantastic story so far can’t wait to see what is coming so please update asap

any chance for an update? :)

Jesus Christ! O.O I'm in total awe, biting my fingernails and with redstained eyes from devouring your incredible story in one single day. Please, forget my clumsy English, I'm spanish and it's been a while since I've written a review in your language but this.. *points at the screen*... is a jewel! Best superman/batman universe that I've ever read!

Please, do tell me that you intend to finish it because, after the near heart- attack it gave me its reading, I need a happy, cape-floating-in-the-wind ending. Please, please, please (I have to say that I never beg like that but, hey, this is special).

Superman and Batman had been my favorite heroes since I was a girl in ponytails, a fever that Superman Returns and the Nolan trilogy had fueled again. I wanted so badly that SR had a sequel with Brandon Routh... *sighs*... and a crossover with Batman... So, you see, you have fullfiled all my desires I just need an end of your story and I'll be the happiest woman on earth.

At this moment I'm too frantic to leave you a serious review with the list of all the things that I loved the most about your story, but I think I can name a few: fantastic humanization (sorry, I think I've just inventend the word) of Superman. He's no longer... flawless, ultraperfect, godlike. He suffers, not only physically but, specially, emotionally. You happen to capture all the sides of his pain: the loneliness, the I'm-an-alien, the weariness of the lie he lives everyday... Incredible. The plot: awesome, thick, tiding Superman and Batman's universes. The pace: faster and more desperate with each passing chapter, until I as reading nearly as fast as Clark; The inmense gratitude I profess you for having rid SUperman for his unhealthy crush for Lois, the way you introduced Lee character, a woman that can see the real person behind both the hero and the reporter. The way Superman's friends grow stronger as he weakens...

*sighs* Sorry for the babling, I'm starting to sound like Clark Kent; The one and only complaint that I have (besides awaiting for the happy ending) is that I was expecting... um... more steamy scenes, given the M rating ;) But... you still have a few more chapters to write, isn't it? *bright, shinny, Puss-in-boots smile*

So... amazing job. I'm sincerely your fan and I truly hope you can finish this story. Thank you again for all the hours of insane happiness you've already given to me.

VaneCaos

I loved this story. A lot went on but I kept it straight.

I absolutely love this story! It's so hard to find Superman/OC stories much less a good one! I can't get enough of it! It's fantastic! Please, please, please update this story! I need to know what happens next! I'm begging here!

I was reading this story a couple of years ago and lost track of it. I'm really glad I found it agian. I hope you are planning on finishing it up. You're so close to having a completed story; it would be a shame to leave it undone.

OMG! please dont end it there. more please?

OMG, this is an amazing story, so interesting and thrilling. D

I love Clark and Lee together, they're such a beautiful couple.

I would be very happy if you could finish the story. Unless that was the last chapter. I love this story! )