This Jareth is a scary dude. Well written. Thanks.

Ha-ha! Well done, I really like this! I suppose it could be taken as a parody and critique of badly written Labyrinth fanfics. Anyways, I much enjoyed this one shot. Well written, well done!

(0_0)...again it looks like im not gonna go to sleep tonight for fear of how this will affect my dreams.

The thing that makes this piece truly amazing, in my eyes, are the lines littered here and there between the parts of Jareth that every hopelessly romantic fan-girl knows. For lack of a better word, and perhaps crassly, I dare to call them slightly sadistic undertones. The not so subtle hints of character fourteen year old girls chose to call denial... Regardless, this is yet another beautiful portrayal.

Yup all the cold arrogance is there.:D (shoots a nervous glance at Jareth's glare) Okay I'm going to hide now,but really great job!:D (runs and hides)

that was frighteningly accurate,except i think she was 15 but yeah.i can imagine him saying that which is very scary.

that was dumb and untrue,age dosent matter with love,especialy when ur emortal...

I think this is a wonderful series, and such a wonderful (and accurate) character description. Really, I just love it. This is Jareth. Brava

This is like the best series of stories I have ever seen in my life dude. I honstly hope you keep writing it.

Jareth's image exactly. We do portray him in that way, careless or lovestruck but then maybe thats a way to ease our minds on the way he truely is. You portraied him in his true colors, wounderful work.

oooohhhhh! wonderful! i think thats killer! all right!