Beautiful.

This was so sweet. :) When I was reading the book I hoped that Jo would marry Laurie but Ms. Alcott decided to let Jo marry off to the Professor. I was so sad when she told Laurie "No" Why! :(

Anyways... I loved the story.

Ah, so delicately romantic! I love how well this delves into both Jo and Laurie's character. Lovely job.

Maybe I'm being a nit-pick, but I wish you'd had Jo call Laurie 'Teddy' instead.

I agree with Quirky Del. Write more, please? :)

Yay! I knew that Laurie/Amy was all just a terrible nightmare. Please write more cute fluff like this.

hey, i like this! it shows a side of jo not many people write about, and you wrote it very well. but what about meg and beth and amy? didn't they see?

anyway, well done!

I agree with Quirky Del - the part right before he kisses her until the end plays out like a movie in my head. So right. You got some serious skill.

Loved this!I love the entire concept for this! I will say that there's quite a few grammatical and punctuation errors throughout, but the story is really good! Perhaps a beta or word/spell check could help a bit...I know I use mine quite extensively! They're a great help. But, you have a gift with story telling, you really set the scene and painted a lovely picture here! I thought you did a very nice job capturing Laurie's playfulness and Jo's hesitation! I really liked your description of Jo shaking her scarf and the snow scattering about like diamonds...that was really cool.

I also saw the entire thing in my mind as I was reading - particularly the end...

"He kissed her gently running his hands through her hair and touching the nape of her neck.

“There that wasn’t so bad was it?” Laurie breathed softly.

Jo was crying though. She tried to brush away her tears with the back of her hand.

“Jo, Jo, Jo…” He breathed and touched her wet cheeks. “Don’t be afraid.” He whispered. “Don’t be afraid to get what you want.”

That was really well done, I completely pictured all of that!

Lovely, fantastic one shot! : ) Warmed my heart.

Cheers,

Del

Cute.

That was beautiful. It was short and it didn't have a

bit of sex in it.

Oh, oh, oh my! That's really nice, I think. of course I perfer stuff where Laurie and Jo are older, but still anything about them! You should write a pairing of them and their first night together (catch my drift?) as humor/ romance. 'cus they're always funny together and we also know they were perfect for each other, chemistry, he was passionate over her, etc. Jo and Teddy (belonged) together, forever!