On a whim, I decided to re-read this because starting to watch a let's play of Ocarina of Time reminded me it'd been too long since I had. And I'm so SO very glad that I did. My younger self who had finished reading this originally missed out on so much; like some backstory from Kairen, or parts of Zelda's path. And reading with a more mature mind made me realize just how truly amazing and powerful it is. The journey that each person goes through; Link, Kairen, Daimen, Linae, Jon, Jake, Fiona-even Zelda, was so beautifully displayed through your amazing descriptions and ability to show the world that you intended. I'm so, so grateful that you were able to share their world with us, and that I was able to experience this again. I just can't even fully put into words how I feel, so I'm going to end this review here. Thank you!

Im about half way thrugh what you have so far, so i have dicided to finially review.

First, i must admit you supprised me, plesently. In the majority of cases, I do not read self inserts or major oc inserts under any sercemstance. Most of the time i think they are desprite and annoying. However i must admit, yours is the exception to the rule. It is rather engageing, I find it creative and rather seemlessly pulled off, wich is rair. You make your protag seem as though she belongs, wich I must applaud you for. Well done.

I also like the way you right. The turn of a phrase, the flow of the words, it gos together seemlessly in most airas, wich is I think every writer strives for. No one wants to be chunky and clumsy, wich you certenly are not.

That brings me to your style, wich is well defined. You are genuin, direct, and articulate, wich are qualitys that constitue a good grasp on your own style.

All in all any complaints i may have are very minor, and I am not one to nit pick, not something that is this well done :) Im looking forward to reading the rest of this, and i hope it is as excellent as the begining. Im not sure you will update, but i certenly hope you do.

-Overseer out-

Wow it has been a while since I read his story! I had to reread it in order to remember how it went! Nevertheless I really enjoy the story. Hopefully you add more to this because I'm still reading! Writer's Block can be a pain but hang in there! Looking forward to your next chapter . Best of luck!

story is great with near perfect character development, it progressed into the important events too slowly though. still a great story and i am going to finnish reading it

now THAT was worth the wait. my god, i can't wait to see what happens next.

but then...oh jeez. then it might be ending NOOOO

That...was an epic cliffhanger.

So much suspense in what is one of the shorter chapters.

And so much going on at once that's so important to the story.

Link's inner battle with himself makes me wonder how he'll act when he actually ends up fighting Ganondorf.

Though what really made this chapter was the fight between Kairen and Linae. The end of said battle (and chapter) definitely left me with chills. And to think of all the things that lead to such a battle...

Anyway, excellent chapter! Can't wait until the next installment.

Wow, I didn't realize how much I missed rS until I dove into it once more.

Iane...scares me. She has lived up to her expectations of being a scary bitch. _ I would never want to meet her in any shape or form.

It's so hard to choose a favorite character in this. Even Jake, I adore.

Though, I did NOT expect Jake and Link's feelings towards Fiona and Kairen to be revealed in this chapter. Like, at all.

And I definitely didn't expect to actually LIKE the Goddesses, who would do such a thing to Jake. _

Man, I feel bad for both Link and Jake. T~T For completely different reasons, but still.

Oh rS, how I love thee so. The plot has thickened to its peak, I so look forward to the next chapter.

-Cat

so it's the end of the middle...so it's the beginning of the end...

NO I love this story. don't end it...

either that or somehow grace us with a sequel. please?

pretty please even.

anyway, as any reader should do:

the annoying thing is, i can't really say anything.

this doesn't have any flaws to critque as far as i can see.

Keep up the good work

There aren't words to describe how AMAZING and suspenseful this chapter was.

From the point I delved into Kairen's POV of Nabooru's speech, to the very end, I was on the edge of my seat.

Everything that was hidden has been revealed, and though I want to suffocate Link and Kairen with hugs (you know I would too), I am ecstatic to see what is next on their paths to destiny, and of course Linae and Daimen as well.

I can only hope that the chapters to come will be as breath takenly heart wrenching and epic as this one.

Psh, and you said I wouldn't adore rS after this chapter.

Keep up the amazing work. I await the next installment just as impatiently as I did this one.

-Cat

Review for Chapter 22 since the site is being a jerk:

There aren't words to describe how AMAZING and suspenseful this chapter was.

From the point I delved into Kairen's POV of Nabooru's speech, to the very end, I was on the edge of my seat.

Everything that was hidden has been revealed, and though I want to suffocate Link and Kairen with hugs (you know I would too), I am exstatic to see what is next on their paths to destiny, and of course Linae and Daimen as well.

I can only hope that the chapters to come will be as breath takenly heart wrenching and epic as this one.

Psh, and you said I wouldn't adore rS after this chapter.

Keep up the amazing work. I await the next installment just as impatiently as I did this one.

-Cat

A very interesting beginning. It gives good insight into Rina while not dragging thing on into boringness. I'm liking this so far, you write very well!

wow, what a incredible story. ;3; seriously, this has kept me glued to my computer for 3 days straight, a chap in the morn and two at night. Hehe, never read a story so addictive :D i love the slow pace thang youve got going on with the lil romance side of it :3

Excellent work, keep up the fantastic work dude!

(also, im shocked youve only got 100 reviews for this masterpiece. people need to review yer story more ;3 )

heyyoo, i was too lazy to login haha, but anyway... :]

this chapter was amazing. i liked it by far the best. lianne's/linae's character has been brought all the more into depth and not to mention daimen's truest intentions. i think i like them (as in linae and daimen) alot more than link and kairen ahah. i feel like they could be brought into further depth (link and kairen), like something is missing from them but i can't pinpoint it really. x-x but anyways, nevertheless, the most i can say now is that my fave part, of course, was the ending haha. who's wasnt? xD it was like, even though i already knew earlier that daimen had these feelings, a slap in the face. and how sad it was that link did have some sort of chance of saving lianne from becoming who she does in the future.

anyway, i'm looking forward to the next chapter so i hope you update soon :]

~neets

This was such a brilliant chapter!

Now it makes sense why Link and Damien/Daimen hate each other so much.

Can this story become any more suspenseful? I mean Damien/Daimen feelings for Kairen...

What inspired you to make Damien/Daimen feelings towards Karien?

I was surprised how Lianne was acting. I never would have though I would come to like her. 0.0

Anyhoo, I really liked this chapter and keep up with the brilliant work. -

-Hime

wow...didn't see that one coming. so Daimen is a freak (he likes his sister). this is EPIC! please update ASAP. i'm impatient for more good chapters of an already awesome story.