Am I the only one who thinks the rhino is a reference to Spiker and Sponge murdering James's parents?

I find this chapter kind of short, but I wonder what it would look like when James meets the bugs in his point of view. Oh how I wondered what his point of view would look like. Oh well, I guess I'll leave the writing up to you.

Wow, poor James. He was so unwanted, so unloved, by his aunts until those fantastically wonderful and awesome bugs came along and took him away from his aunts. Um, I was wondering if i could maybe use the idea of this fanfic. But I'm only going to be taking four chapters of this. But, anyways, good fanfic.

Nice job. I'm happy you remembered the kiss, its the most important part of the movie.

PLEEEEZEEEE WRITE MORE!

useually i don't really like long storys like this but this is DEFINATLY an exception! :) (but its sad! : )

*Giggle, snort*

I'm sorry, but... this dude really works with kids? *Laughs* How the Hell does he keep his job? Does his boss really likes the brownies he brings the work? Seriously, him working with kids is a little to much for me to swallow!

*Laughs hysterically*

Dammit! Sorry, I'm being rude, but that is too damn funny!

Demonwolf, I have to say something.

On one hand, I'm glad that you're focusing on James and the bugs in this story, instead of your OCs. On the other hand, the later chapters are basically re-telling the movie, which is a bit boring.

PS: I have to agree with xRedxWinex- Miss Spider is kickass.

PSS: I haz a theory! Aunt Sponge and Aunt Spiker are lesbian lovers (ew) who aren't related! They wanted James's mother as a lover (threesome lesbian sex, maybe?), but James's mother was straight. They hate James because they're still pissed at his mother, and those two ladies can hold a grudge.

PSSS. I'm sorry, lesbians of the world-you are all probably much better then those two bitches.

Jesus fucking Christ!

When I first read this, I seriously thought that Harold was going to rape James. AHHHHH, MY CHILDHOOD! :O

I think that we need a little lesson from Sonic!

watch?vzMWzubLILds&featurerelated.

aw.

i love miss spider to bits

gonna throw in some spider/centipede in there?

would love to see how young,innocent James would come to terms with his mother/sister-figure starts lovin' on another man! heh heh lol.

Just asking.

-Your Reddest Wine, xRedxWinex

I'm likin' this so far! Kepp it up!

I really like your story but I wish that you would update faster!

Well, well, well... A JATGP fic! I must say, I've rather enjoyed this. I've only seen 3 of them here. There really needs to be a section for them.

But I digress. I like your take; though not especially origional, it is entertaining and in charactor. And it looks like you're actually updating, which is good. I look forward to seeing where this goes next.

Anyway, ciao!

-SN

It really is kinda sad isn't it? Him feeling guilty running away even when they treatd him lik crap. Ah, well. He IS 6 years old i guess...

Update!

Urmm...ok, the story seemed well written and all but it's almost like just a retelling of James and the Giant Peach isn't it? Or is this still like in the intro stages? Are you gonna add something new later on?

Don't get me wrong, i liked JATGP but if you're just gonna retell the story with only a few added details it'll be kinda boring since we know what's going to happen next.

But that said, i still love the way you write. Just add someting different or something never mentioned in the story before and this can be quite good.