Reviews for Saved By The Enemy
Blahblahblah chapter 9 . 3/5/2011
Cuuuuute love it! Good work! Love the last line!
wind-master-redmoon chapter 9 . 8/16/2008
eekk that was so great
jetara lover chapter 9 . 3/29/2008
I thunk I've reviewed most of your stories, but out of all of them the callenge is my fav. this is second. LOVE IT!
NeverGoodbyeRoxas chapter 9 . 1/9/2008
I'm sorry, but..it all seemed so rushed. And the part where Katara just burst into tears was pretty melodramatic considering the tone you've set for the story. If you could have expanded more on their time together and formed some sort of tension between her and the mask, it would have felt a tad more realistic. The angst fest she had just came out of nowhere. Build it up more and flesh it out. That way the reader can sense the drama too.
Shadowsole chapter 9 . 12/22/2007
wow

amazing
oragueya22 chapter 9 . 11/16/2007
not bad...

the ending was cute

:)

now off topic...

y'all... icebox...

are you from Georgia?
SexxiNElusive chapter 3 . 8/3/2007
flowers to all ur reviewers! lolz and i like it, the abrupt-ness makes it seem mysterious
SexxiNElusive chapter 2 . 8/3/2007
your story seems very rushed, but i like the plot line...i wonder where this is going *hmm...*
SexxiNElusive chapter 1 . 8/3/2007
it was ok, but it was very abrupt. there wasnt enough detail...or was that what u were going for...?
avatargirl4eva chapter 9 . 7/21/2007
SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL, SEQUEL!
avatargirl4eva chapter 9 . 5/13/2007
SEQUAL, SEQUAL, SEQUAL

c'mon i'm dying to know what could happen next
avatargirl4eva chapter 1 . 4/11/2007
oh, the zutarian cuteness!

write a sequal plz
Black Silver chapter 9 . 4/9/2007
Not too bad...

The ending was a little cheesy, and your grammar and spelling were awful. Try getting a beta reader.
gigi2690 chapter 9 . 3/14/2007
aw...I love the last line! Absolute brilliance!

gigi
AriesPrincess chapter 9 . 3/9/2007
I like how you mix the flash backs with present time. Very effective
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