You have no idea just how in love I am with your story. You are completely inspiring; your diction is just- wow. It is poetic, and strange, and broken, and maddening, and cynical, and so completely dark that gifts me a passion I try very hard to express in every story I read. Your writing is inspiring, and ideas amazing, that it makes me wish I could write a story even a fraction of the worth this story surely is. I need more of this, please. I am addicted- hooked. Quitting now would be giving up and this is something worth holding on to. The story is flawless, the characters are bitter, all except for Sora and Kairi who so clearly resemble misplaced innocence. Roxas and Naminé's relationship is sweet in the strangest way possible and I couldn't help but love the faults in their comfort together. Roxas and Axel's disastrous, star-crossed path of eternal souls meant to fall in love only to perish tragically is something I fawned over. You include these pasts that lay beautifully throughout time and each one is unique and miserable, but in the grandest possible way. I really do have hope that you will eventually continue this story, despite last updating in 2007. You have ideas, that much is clear, there is still so much left unsaid that I could go insane thinking up the possibilities for a story heading down such a dangerous path. You are inspiring, your story is fantastic, and I cannot stop listening to The Flowers since you wrote an excerpt from the song. Please consider writing more.

I'm not quite sure where you're going with this story to be honest. However, I love your diction; the way you elaborate is almost poetic. It's beautiful.

Hi, I just found and read your story. I just wanted to tell you how much I love you for referencing Sandman!

I just read this all in one sitting, and. Whoa. Seriously, that is my knee-jerk, off the cuff response. This story is AMAZING. The characters are darker, but still pretty true to the source, and the plot is really compelling. Around chapter 6 it occurred to me that you could honestly publish this as an original story.

To put this in perspective, I don't usually fall in love with overly dark stories. Angst in moderation, you know? Most of my favorite KH stories balance the drama with a dose of humor. This one... not so much. (Unless you count jaded sarcasm and cynical irony. Which I kind of do, but still.) But you totally make it work, and I adore it.

Gotta say, my favorite parts are the dreams. I actually get a little bit confused at times when it switches to the "present," but that's probably just me being dense-cut me a little slack, it's a quarter of 3 in the morning. But I really enjoy the past lives the most. It's actually a thought I've had myself: everyone assumes Axel and Roxas's next life is going to be the happy ending they never got, but what if it's not? What if they're doomed to die tragically again and again and again?... That would really suck.

So yeah, needless to say, I REALLY HOPE you plan on finishing this story. You say on your profile that you're rewriting (not that I understand why, since it's already brilliant), but I'll keep an eye on it, hoping to see more soon.

O-hohoh, wow. I tell you what, WOW. It's been a long time since I've read something this good. I mean, the little dreamemorywhoa things should be expanded into their own stories, dangit; they all sound so damn - well, good.

Um. D: SADFACE AT ROXAS. WHUT. What's wrong with him? Aside from the obvious.

Oo, really excited to see what happens next~

Omygod your story is awesome! Its fantastic! I love the basic concept of all the reincarnation and the tragedy makes it even better. The school sounds magnifecent (excuse the spelling), and I wish my school had uniforms like that (though my school doesn't have uniforms at all). The history is interesting too, I can't believe you were able to find an aztec name, and Axel's past self being Richard the Lionheart was very imaginative. I love how each Roxas and Axel are each severely twisted in their own ways. Please keep writing! Please?

This is beautifully written, you have no idea how warm inside it makes me. The descriptions are so professional and wonderful. I love the thing about the past lives, it always makes me sad to see how horribly it ended.

Keep up the good work, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

oh my gosh, i love this, i love you... but!

there hasnt been an update in over a year, gasp! ive said it.

and that kind of sucks, but oh well.

this is one of the best stories ive read in a while and now im so excited that i feel the need to go and check out your other stuff. so yeah.

This is a really good story, even if I don't quite understand all of it. But I'm sure I will at some point, if there are later chapters, which I hope for. Pleeaase write more! It's really interesting! *makes puppy eyes*

Egad, what was he doing with that bunsen burner?

I know you say you like reviews, and so that's really one of the only reasons I am leaving one. Not because the story isn't amazing, but only because I can't find the words to better describe it. All I could really say is that... I didn't realize I could feel so many different emotions at once until I read this story. There truly are no words.

I think your disclaimer killed me. 8DD *glomp*

I really like this stroy. There something about it that makes me just want more, so please update soon! :)

Haha. I'm liking this alot.

No, you must update! Where has your enthusiasm gone? Damn time. I love this story so far, despite how bizarre I first found it to be. And I noticed in these dreams and memories the both of them have, Axel is generally the one in a position of power and always the older one, which I find intriguing. And I can understand Axel's frustration with waiting if he's the one who is always reborn first. lol. I couldn't imagine constantly having to endure that.

Tell me what happens next, dammitt!