I love how you made sasuke waited for sakura. All sasusaku fic I read made sakura waited for sasuke when sasuke jump from bed to bed. One fic I read even made sasuke married and her wife pregnant when sakura stayed as a blushing virgin waiting for sasuke. After sasuke's wife and unborn child died, he meet sakura and sakura gave her love and virginity just after 3 days. I am tired of these people who think the woman is the one who should wait or think a woman's love is invalid if they don't wait for the one they love to take their virginity.

LOVED IT :)

Idk maybe it's cuz it's an old fic and you're probably not posting anything anymore (and I'm probably talking to no one) but I have trouble reading this actually. Maybe it's just the style I'm not used to, but there's also the OOCness. Also you made Sasuke working with orochimaru sound like a nine to five job. I'm not trying to be mean please don't get confused.

At first, I thought the story's progress was too fast and I was like, "What the heck happened?" But as the story goes on, I immediately loved the characters' somewhat OCness and laughed really hard at funny parts! Don't get me started when Sasuke was thought to be girl. XD You mentioned there was a sequel, right? THANK YOU! Looking forward to your future stories!

That was nice. I like fanfics like this.

I want MORE of this fluff -'.'-

Omg that was so good! My fave moments:
-"Shitshitdoubleshit"
-sasuke growing a voice box and emotions
"Because you have a penis"
rofl!

good!

I just saw that you didnt update the sequel for 5 years...FIVE! So im not gonna read it, id rather have this story ending like this!

That was really amazing and im so glad that i read this!

Thank you SO much for posting this, love yah!

oooooh the fluffy part in the end

oh come oooooooooooon, i cant wait to read what happened!

Sasuke you horny bastard... you will get your Saku-chan later, dont worry

WOO! CHICKEN ASS HEAD IS BACK!

xDDD Kakashi has left the room... i thought he was a pervert and wanted to hear it...