There is only one word to describe this story, and that is:

Brilliant.

I have never read anything that captures Yukino, Haruka, and even Shizuru, Natsuki, and Chie before. This final conversation between Chie and Shizuru was absolute genius. I actually believe that this could happen in the canon. It's like an extended version of the original series, but with all the endings I could ever want. Thank you for this incredible contribution.

I've read this fic a few times and decided to now state it's loveliness. :)
I enjoy reading it from time to time.
and admire it's beauty.

Wow... awesome story! The plot progressed very smoothly and naturally (in my opinion) and all the characters were quite believable. Great job!

Really enjoyed your story. Really well written and entertaining. I love Yukino x Hakura

I WANT YOU TO NOT BE DEAD NOW, PLZ.

Great story! Loved it. Great work on keeping the characters personality ;)

I'd love to read a sequel or something for this...

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Now THAT is a good fanfiction. Thank you so much for writing this great Haruka x Yukino fic. It was both adorable, heart catching at points, and an over all joy to read.

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ありがとうございます！(Thank you!)

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~TR

An excellent story. I'd elaborate, but it's past midnight, and I'm tired. You'll just have to accept that it's very, very good. Cute at many parts.

Thank you, thank you, thank you, for completing this wonderful story! I had thought it might have been given up, as the gap between updates increased, but I am glad to find I was wrong.

This story is one of my personal favorites both for its cute and clever plot, which ended quite charmingly with a cup of tea and two of Fuka's most clever girls, and for the way you write it out.

I really enjoyed how you drew out Yukino's confession, and seeing just how delightfully playful my favorite Mai-Hime pair can be with each other. One of the best things about this story, though, is how very easy it would fit with the original series. The characters are themselves, and even better they grew as their own characters. Haruka, who seems to me to be a character one would find hard to write, is so very endearing in how she deals with Yukino's confession. And with trying to understand her own feelings afterward. Her grumble over only 'Two and a half kisses' made me laugh!

Perhaps it is just me, but I get the impression that your overall style has become a bit more polished. I always enjoyed the way you told this story, but the last two chapters just feel a bit more clear and active. Though that could also be my giddiness over the...realization?...between Haruka and Yukino.

On a different note, Chie truly is quite a trickster isn't she?

Thank you again for sharing!

Great story, I enjoyed it immensely!

Oh wow, this is the second time you've surprised me with updating this, and two chapters at once to finish it off at that... Oh, I'm so glad to see this fic come to a happy ending. It truly stands out as the best Harukino fic I've read here. Thank you very much for writing this, and for continuing to write this until it was done. You've made this reader very happy.

Great chapters!More to come please? _

Shizuru, ... game...set... match!

Oh my word. You haven't disappeared! I declare this a national holiday. It shall overshadow St. Patrick's Day by a mile.

Well, I've never watched Mai HiME, but this story was very enjoyable regardless! That's a great sign for any piece of literature, in my opinion. Please do continue to write; I might melt due to lack of Biblia.