Aw! That's adorable!

Lets see, first off, Whoo! And yes, I did pick up the story reference, so yay me.

Still laughing over the fact you came up with the Cake Monster, still, DW is known for things like that. Good job!

Hi ZK - brillant ending! Keep the DW fics coming!

IzzyBree

I think that was the funniest thing I've read in weeks! do you mind if i steal this quote: "Oh my God yeah! And we ended up dancing down the street wearing each other’s shoes singing the ‘Teen Titans’ the tune!” and use it as my new msn name?

Great end, thanks so much! I like how the Doctor just sat there and smiled as everyone else tried to be all sneaky and surprising... heh heh. I loved the clandestine confession about the cake monster, and how Rose believed him. _

I had trouble relating to the whole Jelly Baby thing, since for one, I'm not a long-time fan (I know he used to eat them, but that's the extent of it), and two, I don't even know what they are... P The spot I most felt connected to the characters was when the Doctor grinned in his 'childish lopsided way' 'cause I totally know that look. _~ I thought the last line was very, very satisfying!

that was really funny i really liked it

Ha! That was really cute. I loved the cake monster, had me laughing my ass off.

AW . . .

Fun story!

wonderful

Funny funny funny yay :D

The drunken part made me laugh very loudly and it also the Teen Titans bit made me hum it for ages it's still in my head(continues to hum it)

Fantastic story.

HAA! Nicely finished! SO cool! And nice couple of 'Lar' references XD TEEN TITANS! *Dances off singing*

Yeah, our pt is waiting for a sixth member, so I'm just killing time XD

hehe...homicidal cakes...funny stuff, funny stuff. Can't wait for more. Keep up the great work and update soon!

HAHAHA!

Omg.. I'm dying. A turn from the norm is just what was needed! My favourite line was when the Doctor "reached for something to hit it with...What killed cake?" I LOVE how it ended up looking like the Doctor was totally just screwing around, least of all eating the cake. The last line was great, relating the cake to the tree. Gee, why couldn't she see it, honestly?

*rolls around on the floor some more*

Very funny