awesome trilogy and if you decided to write more i would most certainly read it. this story series was truly fantastic rose/ten is my favorite pairing and you certainly did it right. i liked katie the squirrel that was one random element in the story that gave some spectacular humor jackie's character was excellent and spot on. keep up the awesomeness that is your fan-fiction. and i cant wait for more

Oh, that's just brilliant...don't you think that would look awesome on-screen too? x

I'm part way through this...and it is very good! I just have to review this chapter, because the beginning just had me giggling like an idiot XD

Have just got 'round to reading this... I could give you a list of people to blame, but then I wouldn't be able to review due to the amount of work I've gotta do for tomorrow, and the list is way too long.

Moving on... aw... tha'ts really cute at the end. Although I must disagree love's more than just that. Love's so much more.

Anyway, good story, sad to see the end. May I offer you congratulations on being able to stick with a plot for long enough to finish it. I sadly have neither the will power nor commitment. *shrugs*

The end? It can't be! No! Darn it. Shame. But it was a great story and very cute. Are you gonna write anything else? Please? Go on you know you want to...well i'm going to go babble at someone else now, but great story and I hope you do another one. bye Ignoramus, bye Charlie!

If us readers haven't gotten that point from these yet, I doubt we ever will. That was absolutely gorgeous - I love how you ended it so freakin' much. I could make a horrible reference to the whole "Oncoming Storm" thing and how the end was like the calm after the storm, but I'm...well, I was gonna say I wouldn't but I guess I kinda just did. Dx All in all, though, this series has been made of undeniable win - and this ending is absolute love. (No pun intended, I swear.)

That was just so beautiful and fitting.

I've enjoyed this story all the way through.

Well, we can't really say 'better way' since we don't know your original plans, but it's definitely classic Doctor. Talk the enemy into submission - works every time (for the Doc, at least). ;P Definitely enjoyed this chap, though - great job.

why for the final time? What's happened to Charlie and baby gernade? (what ya calling the gernade? is it a boy or a girl? if it's a girl, how about Gertrude and if it's a boy, Graham?) any way, can't wait till the next chappies up!

It is good

:-)

I like it!

aw. poor doctor, I just want to give him a hug! Great chapter, and glad you updated. PS. Just out of curiousity do you charge 'Charlie the chainsaw' rent? Because you shouldn't let him become a freeloader...lol!

Aw, Tommy Tyler... is it sad that I want one?

Anyway, my sadness can be debated at a later date, it's a really cute chapter, well done.

My brain's kinda exploding too much right now to put coherent thoughts together properly, but I loved this chap. And I don't know why, but Tommy being brown-ginger is like...hilarious, for some odd reason. Like...Pouty!Doc 'cause his kid's kinda ginger and he's not. xD All in all, great chap.

Great chapter.

Thuis chapter was so sad yet so beautiful at the same time.

Okay I *am* goign to cry now.

I really am...

:-(

They all survived and Rose and The Doctor aren't going to die but he could have got Gallifrey back and didn't...

*cries*

Alozo

P.s. Hi Charlie