I so love this story and would really like nothing more then to read more of it so please keep this up and update again soon because I can't wait to see just what you are going to have happen next.

Has abandonado el fanfic o se lo has dado a alguien mas para que la siga?

update please

slash fic you say? i got the feeling its gonna be naruto/harry. this story is promising but too bad i don't read slah.

more pls

Oh please update, it's really good.

The beginning was pretty good, and the end of the chapter was at about th esame level. It was the middle of the chapter that had awkward sentence flow. Your punctuation and/or grammar was off making it difficult to immerse myself in the story. There were also small things here and there that I found a bit, er, bothersome? Such as the use of "-cough _ cough-" in actual writing. And, while I guess it was meant to be humorous, the dialogue for characters didn't fit their personalities, nor did it mesh with the situation. E.g. Sentence spoken by Hokage at the meeting ending with a "huh"... also, I only saw this once so far, but I think it would be best to avoid gratuitous usage of Japanese, as it comes off, er, inelegant (or something like that). All that pointed out, your dramatic writing is pretty awesome. The darker scene you began with set my expectations high, and the scene with Harry's landing (lol) was rich in description, if a bit shallow, and only because you have a tendency to "tell" instead of "show". Good work!

Nooooooo! This cannot end here. I refuse to not know the rest of Yuki's intriguing amazing journey. Please write more! XD

is this a slash or not i'm getting mixed messages here

This is pretty good.

Can't think of anything specific. Just good.

Can I have some more please?

Will Yuki be gaining any memories of being Harry Potter and of the world of magic? Were any other wizards and witches reborn into this shinobi world? Or was Harry the only one because of the unique and powerful way he was inserted into the Land of Fire? Did this happen because he's the Master of Death? Is there a specific reason he was sent to this land rather than any other world or place?

cool fic
I'm looking forwards to the next update

You are not the only one to get that error message. I could not get on to my account page for the entire day.

Great stuff, but with the length of time it took for this chapter to come out I had forgotten the rest of it lol. You said if there was a pairing you have a sakura/male character in it? Does that mean there will be yaoi? I really hope not, because although I have nothing against gay people I don't like reading a fiction where the main character is no heterosexual. Can he do that fire thing with all the elements? If so that would be awesome. Also was that fire animal bit fiendfyre, because it certainly reminded me of a small version of it. Wondering if he will be getting the memories of harry potter back and hope that the harry potter he was before was amazingly knowledgeable in magic so that he isn't restricted by the canon version's knowledge. Update again soon :D

So, Orochimaru is after Yuki...