Reviews for A Whump in the Life Of,,,
ladygris chapter 15 . 1/3/2012
One of my biggest complaints with SGA is that they killed Carson. He was the heart of that team, and they could have chosen someone else to take out.

That said, I love writing with clone!Carson because he's got this wonderful angst of not being the original Carson but still having all of those memories. This scene at the end of Kindred Part 2 was wonderful because I could really feel Rodney's grief. The grief that the man he'd known was still dead but that he'd been given a second chance only to have it ripped away.

Great writing on these. And I hope you write some more SGA in the future.
ladygris chapter 14 . 1/3/2012
Oh, wonderful reaction. I loved Rodney's sudden hug and hope that this wasn't a dream.
ladygris chapter 11 . 1/3/2012
"Next time, try breakin' a thinner stick." ROFL!
ladygris chapter 10 . 1/3/2012
Loved seeing Ford in this one, and the camaraderie was really well-done. And Ford got to name the next Wraith! LOL!
ladygris chapter 9 . 1/3/2012
ROFL! Leave it to Carson to turn his concussion into a lesson for the two boys in how they behave in the infirmary! Loved it!
ladygris chapter 8 . 1/3/2012
Rodney never does fail to amaze. :)

Loved this snippet, too. Carson struggling with all of that, being burdened and having no one to unburden himself to, is a great way to describe him. I loved how Rodney showed the right amount of patience that Carson needed, even envying his ability to be open about what he was feeling.
ladygris chapter 7 . 1/3/2012
Okay, Carson with the sticky fingers from icing was way cute!

Another fantastic shot. I have to echo Carson's words. John sure does know how to impress a girl!
ladygris chapter 6 . 1/3/2012
"Rodney, I have a new ZPM for ya." ROFL! What a wonderful way to wake him up! Though the fact that he was waiting for Carson was a great addition, too!

Great shippy story here. :)
ladygris chapter 5 . 1/3/2012
LOL! Definitely funny! ;) Loved the little argument at the beginning, plus our favorite Scot being a lot stronger than he looks. :)
ladygris chapter 4 . 1/3/2012
Okay, so far, this is my favorite. But I love the friendship/relationship that Carson and Teyla share. It could grow into so much more or remain as it is with just the right circumstances.

I loved how you had Teyla telling Carson what she felt when that Wraith took over her mind. I think it lent a bit more sympathy toward her actions as well as showing that she truly had no control.
ladygris chapter 3 . 1/3/2012
Another wonderful snippet! I love how well you capture Carson's hesitance at going through the gate. As well as their amazement at being in a totally new galaxy. :)
ladygris chapter 2 . 1/3/2012
"Bugs." That statement should say it all! LOL!

Great chapter for John.
ladygris chapter 1 . 1/3/2012
What a wonderful chapter! I love Poisoning the Well and I think you did a great job of showing how Carson's reaction would affect his life.
pisces317 chapter 4 . 10/3/2011
I LOVED THIS CHAPTER! I'm glad to see Teyla apologizing (or trying to since Carson never saw a reason for it) to Carson for hurting him and I'm relieved to see someone taking care of him for once rather than the other way around.

Thank you for writing this.
Infinitechange chapter 15 . 2/16/2011
Very cute story snipits.
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