Not bad. My only critique is to stick to one type of narrative. Constantly switching makes it a tad hard to follow.

OMG, I loved it! I really wish you'd make a full blown story out of it because ideas are already going through my head of what can happen next, but alas, this seems to be a one-shot. Interesting pairing, I would've never thought of it.

This was amazing. I really love this. There aren't any Macavity/Skimbleshanks fanfics except this, and I want to write one. But yeah, this is great!

I know its been a while but I was looking for yaoi, I mean slash fics to prove to my friend that there is Macavity slash when I found this one. Oh and don't worry, in the video games section I have definitely seen worse in terms of mental scars.

Didn't freak me out.

hahahahaha.. at least it was a somewhat happy ending, i dont mind the slight oddity~~(:

A great story. Very good.

Okay. Mentally scarred for life. I will have nightmares tonight.

On the plus side, this was very well written and, even though it was slash, it was quite good.

I've just died and gone to Heaven... no doubt... this was great!

i really like this fic. it's different, and since macavity is one of my favorite characters, i enjoy him being cast in a slightly more favorable light. please keep writing!

You were right, this is VERY disturbing.

Wow! Not weird at all. Well, a little. But very well-written and an excellent story; I loved it! (I saved it to my computer so I could read it again and again.) It's a pairing that I don't think I've ever seen before but you pull it off really well. Maybe you could write an additional chapter? :-)

... Uh... Weird.

Whoa! Weird. Neat. No, weird. Nicely writen though.

Wow! I *really* like this and the Macavity-Skimble pairing idea, even if it *is* a slashfic. Skimble and Macavity are two of my favorite CATS characters.

This is really good.

It says when I review that I'm only reviewing on Chapter One. Are you planning to update more chapters or writing a sequel? I'm looking forward to reading more if you plan on adding more. Please, keep up the great work! :)