how fckn dare you bruhhhh! you're absolutely right, htf did we get here?! and now I have to go read this mysterious sequel? ohhhhh I'm furious let me go find this damn thing

Wonderful writing and storytelling. But I understand. Life gets real too much too fast. Hard to come back, much less finish. Ever hopeful to return to a new chapter year after year. I'm not mad, just hopeful you will tell us how you wanted the story to end.

I still love this story and I'm still hopeful you'll come back to finish it's sequel. I just thought maybe if I reviewed for the 100 millionth time you'd maybe reconsider it ;D

You write very well

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*sob... Nooo! I'm so sad I never saw that actually happening like that thank u for the ride it was great very much enjoyed.

I want you to know that I just spent a day rereading this for the third time. This is so well done and well written. I love how you mix the mundane scenes like relena fighting with her bra and her fleeing men with guns. It's just so well written and so scary, you do an amazing job with pacing, I wish I had your talent and I'm shocked this doesnt have more reviews.

Simply Amazing!

AHHHH! OMG! Where is the rest? I'm up and down and left and right! Alive? Dead? It's too much! Oh... There a sequel... [calls off the kidnapping of Eternal contradiction] never mind *ahem* carry on. Great job, btw :)

I remember that when i read this i was so pissed because i thought he killed her. until...i saw there was a sequel. XD

OH MY GOD! I don't normally review a completed story but this is just to EPIC not to do so! you had me on such an emotional roller coaster. i was reeling from beginning to end. You officially had me bawling my lungs out like OMFG! wtf! And i have an exam tomorrow mind you its my finals for university but it was too good to put down! this was beautifully written and the plot was excellent! but seriously you had my going and i haven't had this reaction to a fanfic in a while so i thank you for that. I must recommend this story to my friend and sis this is just too good to not share!

Great story! I love all the sardonic references to Heero’s superhuman powers of perception and survival. The banter between the two in the beginning was great fun as well. And I got a big laugh out of Relena going all princess at the two star hotel.

As I as reading I got a little confused about Relena’s exact feelings on whether or not Heero had betrayed her or was trying to kill her or what else he was exactly up to. But when I think about it that was probably intentional as a sort of reflection of Relena’s own confused mind.

I really like your writing style. Not a lot of authors can pull off writing a compelling fanfic without heavy use of dialog. And I was actually genuinely surprised by the ending. Kudos to you for having the guts to do something like that.

I loved how you paced this story, it was very hard to pause even for a minute just so I could get on to the next chapter. It's been so long since I've read a mystery/thriller of this caliber here in the HxR fandom, I'm just glad you finished this one already as I think the suspense will kill me just by waiting for the update (and now that there's a sequel, I think the possibility is still there D) This is a great fanfiction title, well thought out. You deserve all the praise for it.

Where's the sequel? Too bad you had to end it like that.:)

wow. That was long. But I really enjoyed it. This makes the Gundam pilots real and consistent to their actual characters rather than the OOC's that are more common. I couldn't wait for the ending but you make it so that I couldn't stop reading it. Kudos! I look forward to the sequel.:)

I LOVED this story!