| Reviews for Concede |
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Kitty in the Box chapter 1 . 4/10/2017 OMG how beautiful, how powerful, how intense. one of the best I've ever read. I cried through the whole reading. |
Astral Dragon Spirit chapter 1 . 5/22/2016 You are such a good writer. I really enjoyed this piece. I could see it play out in my head as if I was watching it on the screen. Great job! |
Random Girl chapter 1 . 3/28/2016 This is easily the most realistic fic of them I've read. In fact, it's so real it could be considered canon! |
Spellweaver10 chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 Another perfect example of awe-inspiring writing. God job. |
feedthegrimmjows chapter 1 . 1/15/2016 Beautifully written. I really enjoyed this! |
Prl16 chapter 1 . 8/18/2015 Very beautiful. |
Dino-Rogue chapter 1 . 3/31/2014 All the untold feelings, unanswered questions, all that we did not know... both about Vegeta. Here... or even Bulma. This piece explores, expands, and expounds on the depth of those thoughts, those emotions... every single part. I love this! I simply adore this! Hmm, Goku, his most hated rival and closest ally? So true, so accurate and true indeed. And Bulma's right; his mind may not know it, but his soul definitely does. Wow, Saiyans form a bond even with their enemies? That's something. Oh, I love the switching of POVs here; I always to compliment that when it needs/deserves it, for doing such things in fics, I know, is no easy task. But I am no writer, I assure you. :) "She was either mad or blind." That's right, Vegeta. She does not wish nor intend to make you weak and submit to her demands or whatever, she simply wishes for you to open up and truly let her see your heart; not just a glimpse, too. To truly know what's in it. And, it is true. Vegeta underestimated his heart and what it can do. All his life, he had lost many things... even people. His father? I have just started watching the Friesa Saga, and from doing so, I have seen that no, what he states is not true. He cared for something, or someone, even from the beginning of it all. I think and believe this to be so. Vegeta thinks that by loving his family, that by loving Bulma, he will lose his pride; as a matter of fact, by loving, truly opening his heart to this love that is available to him, he will face his fears and will redeem said pride back with an even greater honor, in an even better way than any in the battlefield. "I see that no one has ever tried to understand or care for you, and because of that you've never wanted to be cared for…and you've never wanted to care for anyone else." Oh, my gosh! Bulma is smart! All she wants is to love him... awww! Girl's got this strong, yet tender power over him! Haha! Believe me, she might be worse (or better, depending on how you look at it and who you ask) than a Super Saiyan! She is willing to die just to prove him wrong? Man, she's got him, all right. That one is certain. "This is not something to be won or lost. It's something to be treasured and saved and protected for all it's worth." That is love's definition, isn't it? Wow... There is more than winning for the sake of winning... there is living for the sake of life... wow! Bulma's got some really quotable quotes for me here! :) But Vegeta is right. She did master him so well. She freed him without him knowing or realizing it. Bulma is his beautiful danger, his safety, his queen. This is a victory, for both of them. They did win, but it's the kind of winning to which there is no losing. Never losing. This piece is the best! Or, one of the best? :) After all, my search is for nothing but the best, the endless best of BV. Awesome job! So great! |
Phoenix Satori chapter 1 . 5/7/2013 gorgeous. just perfect, every emotional beat, every line of dialogue, every layer of exposition -just incredible. unbelievable that i've been in this fandom for so long and managed somehow to miss this gem. because gottdammit THIS IS ALL OF THE WONDERFUL. favoriting this forever, in anticipation of a need to re-read this manymany times more in the future. |
Guest chapter 1 . 10/30/2012 ohhh i love it, great fic |
Haphazard Snow chapter 1 . 3/10/2012 This was really nicely done. Extremely well written and just a really brilliant piece. Keep up the great work! |
The Winged Lioness chapter 1 . 2/13/2012 This is wonderful. Probably the VxB fan fix which best shows their relationship and feelings for one another. Your writing style just makes my eyes stick to the screen and really live the whole scene. I also really liked the idea of the Saiyans having a special bond with their arch-enemies. I've always thought it was just Vegeta's obsession to surpass Goku, but maybe there really is some kind of a bond... I wish I could add something more, but I seem to lose my English skills, when it comes to writing reviews. Just... please keep on writing! |
Joya Verde chapter 1 . 11/20/2011 Wow... that was so dramatic, but I really liked the flow of your writing and how much emotion Bulma had trying to make Vegeta concede to her... this was a really great read! I really liked the ending :D Hope there could be a sequel, like how Vegeta is coping and living life for his family and how his relationship with Bulma improved xDD |
Piccolo is green chapter 1 . 9/5/2011 What a wonderful story. You are a truly talented writer; you captured their emotions perfectly, and the dialogue was just right, not too mushy but still conveying the love that Bulma has for him. |
illegiblewriter chapter 1 . 12/2/2010 Wow. I mean WOW. Easily one of the best BV fics I have ever read. In-character and... wow. |
SnowLion no Miko chapter 1 . 1/3/2010 Oh WOW I absolutely love this story. You captured Bulma and Vegeta perfectly. The ending really got me... great job! |