You are such a good writer

Lovely unfinished story pleads for completion

Beautiful Imagery.

Did not read, but "character is fate", would not that be Freud? Who is no novelist, so i doubt :-/

Come back!

Please update...

Well, it is an interesting and enjoyable story you had going here. It would be nice to have it finished, but I don't see that ever happening here. I do wonder what you are doing now, though not enough to stalk you to actually find out... I'm not creepy like that... though basic google stalking on the TS name does not count.

I think that some of the reason you stopped writing stems from the... umm... fan issues way back when... in the forgotten era; however, it could just be that the story just wasn't meant to be. It was not coming together in your head, from here to letter. Or, RL gave you a crapshoot of a ride. Whatever caused your disappearance from the textualsphinx name, I still wish you well, and hope you haven died since Oct 15, 2010.

I've enjoyed your story thus far. Thanks for putting all that work and heart into it.

I really like it. When will you update?

Poor severus. I think he needs me to kiss him better ;-)

Does anyone know if this author died?

I love your stories, but absolutely detest your disruptive author notes in between chapters. They ruin the suspension of disbelief, they destroy the entire mood of each chapter, and they insult my own emotional response to the drama you've so skillfully written.

You said you'd try not to take a year, but it's been eight, and I kinda want to see this finished, so I'm gonna spam you until something new comes up. XD

This is a strange experience, reading this after so many years and so much canon and fanon inbetween.

You were so very serious and thorough. I can't stop wishing you'd pick up your brush now, after all of the canon is accounted for.

Wonderful story, in case you could not decode it from the above.

hmmm take less than a year.. I think its been far longer lol!