Great story. Great writing.

I really liked this (well, except for cringing over the whole Achilles' tendon thing, I also saw Jared in "House of Wax") I'm glad Gordon was put down, here by Dean and on the show by Sam, he was just such a cold monster.

Goddamnit Gordon. GO DEAN COME ON YOU'RE THE BROTHER! And Sammy...oh my poor baby! El pauvre! And Andy...you were helpful. Soft piano music played and now I'm crying dang it...oh so wonderful...

This is not okay...*sobs*. And I am a she-demon, I love torture. GORDON I WILL KILL YOU AND ISAAC!MOLTEN GOLD DOWN YOUR THROATS AND RAT TORTURE AND SPANISH DONKEYS AND PEARS AND LEAD SPRINKLERS AND DECOMPASITION ALOVE FOR YOU YOU BASTARDS!

DAMN YOU GORDON! I love this OMG I am a Sam girl for life! I love Gordon as an antagonist, but what an assbutt!

I loved it. Lots of Sam whump and Andy was a nice surprise. xo

that was awesome! very scary! eeee! really an awesome story!

You have many admirers and you do deserve them. There are only 2 stories you've written that I havn't enjoyed and they both portray Ellen as a villain. Never thought of her or Jo in that manner so that turned me off right away. I don't think she was written that way on the show or portrayed that way by that wonderful actress Samantha Ferris. Don't know why the majority hate her so much as I only found 1 reviewer of this tale who really likes her character.

Personally, if a story goes against canon, it loses its worth for me. Can't help it. Just the way it feels, so Dean killing Gordon is off for me too.

Also, just a bit over the top were all the injuries bestowed upon Sammy. I do like the whumping of the boys, but this was way too much and I'm sure he would have died for sure after all the damage done to him.

You really did get Gordon right on and even gave him a sidekick which did eventually occur in the canon. It almost seems in some of your stories that you must be psychic as you foresaw quite a few things we hadn't yet seen on the screen. Kudos for that!

Dean's character was right on the nose in this, even to not trusting Ellen, as he does not yet know her true character at this point. What I objected to is pointing the finger of guilt right at her when there was no reason to except for the dislike for her and Jo. (i like Jo as well, even though the multitudes disagree with me).

I'm wondering why you haven't been writing here for a few years? I'm hoping it is not because of illness or personal distress. If so, I'm so sorry, as your stories and episode tags (I love episode tags) are excellent. Perhaps your interest in the show has waned or the plot bunny has expired. Whatever, I hope you are well and know you are an excellent story teller. (perhaps you have gone professional and earning a living at it now? You are better than the pros who write the novels!)

Bevie

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Great story! :)

I hate Gordon. Loved the story, all the big brotherly bravado. Can't believe Dean broke his hand like that, well, yes I can. Nice writing.

that was BRILLIANT! i love gordon fics.. he is so evil and sammy tends to get .. not killed but nearly! :D yey and protective dean! my fave! yeey thankyou! xx

AW OMG

love. you purely have a talent that needs to spread all over the world!

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this was amazin, i have to say hun, it has quickly become a favorate and a classic!

you have an amazong talent to capture the limp sammy side of things and i truly loved reading this!

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oohh! I loved this- amazing dress

Oh my God.

That last chapter was full of so much fluffy goodness. My chest can't take it. O_O

You really got me with the Achilles tendon part. I actually ripped Obi-Wan Kenobi's Achilles in one of my Star Wars fics. XD

But when you did it I just got all squeamish, lol.

And don't even worry about not updating. You did really well on keeping the readers posted. :) It's taken me an entire year to write eight chapters for one of my fics. Bahaha.

Anyways. TERRIFIC story! I loved every second.

I love this story. I love the dialogue. However, as the actually writing goes, you use way to many adjectives and describe too much. That's the hardest part about writing, is not using too many descripters.

Besides that I love the story so far!