Great story I love the flashbacks to highschool. Thx for all youyr stories. You are in my group of favorites!

I will say it.. After all the reading to this point I was waiting to not feel this way anymore but it just gets worse. Brooke's a bitch. I don't find her relationship to Haley to be endearing I find it weird and domineering. Didn't Peyton say to Nathan at the hospital that by leaving he made a choice for Haley that wasn't his to make? Well that's all Brooke ever does and we are supposed to see it as sweet and caring. Well, I don't. I think she's controlling. Haley is an adult and can make her own choices, and she herself has been hiding behind Brooke and using her as a crutch to not deal with life. That relationship is too codependent and unhealthy. And also sometimes I wonder if when people write Lucas in stories if they don't like imagine him with lady parts or something because he's the only one who's ever seen as a good guy worthy of forgiveness and benefit of the doubt. It was wrong for her not to tell Nathan about the baby this long. Plain and simple. No matter what's going on with them, she owes him this information, he's the father for goodness sake. Once you have a baby involved it's time to stop putting yourself and your grudges first. Besides what he did was a horrible thing and personally, I don't think his reasons are enough or make sense. So one bad conversation with Dan and he suddenly gives up on this love that's been described as "epic." I don't think so. But having said that, if after 5 years she still hasn't dealt with it, then it's time to do that. If she was over it then she wouldn't have these feelings. Clearly she's not and that means she needs to be a woman and figure out if it's worth forgiving and grabbing true love. If not, move on once and for all but running continually like a scared teenager is so unbecoming and immature.

loved this story wish you would write about the wedding and the birth maybe brooke and lucas wedding too

One of my all time favourite stories of Naley, just wish it had been completed. It seemed that you was only a couple of chapters away from the epilogue, it's a shame :(

Awww... So freakin' cute! I loved it. Two chapters ago I had to st up and blow my nose and then I told myself that I was going to bed but I just had to finish the story... Your writing is just superb!

I was literally bawling my eyes out before I absolutely knew it was a dream. You see my dreams never really go forward all that much time, so before all the time jumps I thought it was a dream... And it turned out that I was right! Did you happen to take a page out of a Nicholas Sparks' book?

I'm very sorry to ask this and feel free to not answer these next questions, but how did you get the emotions just right, at the clinic? I'm sorry if this hits close to home but did you have an abortion? It all seemed so real. I cried in this chapter, so much...

Wait! I don't get it. She's having his baby again?

Awww... I really truly am totally in love with this story!

Im sad you didn't finish this ):

Im in LOVE with this story !

Love!

Love love love love LOvE!

so far this story is fabulous.

Is there ever going to be an update again?

Too cute - love! Very powerful and moving. Can't wait to read on! Please update very soon :)