Wonderful story, I love some hurt Sam!

Loved reading this story so much! The hugs and the angst in particular were so great, with a fantastic case to boot. T hank you!

Awww Sammy. I can’t imagine what he’s going through. My worst fear ever is going insane. And Sam knows he is and has to live with it. Yikes

Holy shiz! Get out of there Dean!

You’re not a useless coward Dean

Omg so freaking cute. One thing I’m sad about the show is that they never have them say I love you to each other. I guess that’s not a “manly” thing to do but I’d love it!

Oh man poor Sam is probably terrified about what is going on.

Poor Sammy :(

Holy hedgehog what a great start! This is insanely awesome I love it already

Haha! What a fun start. Can’t wait for the angst though

I've read both of your supernatural stories here. Please tell me there are more somewhere? There incredibly well written. I was riveted throughout both. Thankyou for sharing these wonderful stories.

Really suspensefull second chapter! I love this:

"There was no question: these 'powers' were more trouble than they were worth. They proved useful only very rarely, and even then they were painful and traumatic. And when they made him lose control of himself, like they just had, they were also pretty humiliating. He had fought, long and hard, to get Dean to accept him as an adult who could take care of himself. Shit like this undermined him, made him feel helpless, and made Dean see him that way."

This is so true. Poor Sam's visions hampered him so much in the first few seasons. The psychological toll of it making him dependent on Dean must have bothered him.

Haha! Great first chapter. The banter between the brothers is so fun to read. Brought a smile to my face.

And the disembowelment was disgusting.

Supernatural Fan Fiction Monthly Awards: April 2016

This was a very imaginative premise with lots of really good ideas. You have a nice narrative writing style and I can see that you took care to make sure the story flowed for the reader. The story had a storming start that fills the reader with anticipation and the ending did resolve the major plot points, but it seemed to meander a little in the middle and lose it's way a bit. Also, certain plot threads seemed to tail off- for example, the fallout from the preacher being unmasked as a demon. However, overall, I did enjoy this story- thanks so much for writing.

I just wanted to take a moment before I kept reading, to say what a wonderful story this is. I stumbled on your other Supernatural story HunterKiller and enjoyed it so much I went looking for more you wrote. That is how I ended up here. You did not disappoint with this story. I am only saddened by the fact it appears you only wrote 2! By the way your beta, Hanna Korossy is one of my favorite Supernatural authors also.