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Annnnnnnnnd it's gone

Goddamnit. I really, really miss this story. It was so amazing...I'm really sad it's gone. It's been years. I wanna read it again. :'(

Ooooooor it could just disappear completely?!

Oh man! This makes sense. Here I was wondering what kind of 232 word chapter could have 900 reviews. I get it now.

Oh. I have this story in my favorite links collection, and now when I do the big fanfic reading wheel its gone with just this note :-( tbh I'd rather read the old but well-liked - if by authors standards a bit outdated - version than nothing at all.
I sincerely hope for my next reading wheel. Perhaps there is hope to find it again :)

Ahhhhhhh just saw the story is gone for now

Please keep at it, because I loved the story as it was before so if you're making it better then I will definitely love it even more now! I hope you never quit writing because this 'monster' as you called it was still a great story! Keep up the great work!

Please tell me this is getting reworked still? I haven't read this and it's been recced to me by so many people and I can't even read it.

I'm still waiting for the re-write. :( Please update soon!

You've completely botched up your dialogue punctuation. Worst I've ever seen. While the idea is excellent, the grammar issues take away from the story.

It's supossed to be like this:

"Hello," said Harry.

Not... whatever it is you do.

It's been nearly five and a half years and we still await an update...what is taking so long?

awww man! thats just cruel! what happenss next? have mercy, i beg you

i love this story so effing much.
also you continuously misspell the word "effort" (you spell it 'afford"). might want to correct it.
typos aside, your writing rocks.