heh heh like the bouncy ball bit

That was cute-

I can just imagine the trouble Tony and Ziva will get into at the seminar, lol! I'll bet if he gets bored enough, Gibbs will probably join in! XD

I really liked this!

Dark Respite

haha. :) that was great.

really funny.

Aww, can't we read about the rest of it? 8 hours in a seminar together has got to produce some interesting results & Gibbs wouldn't be able to prevent all of boredom-reducing antics heehee!

Anyway: fun, readable & in character, review-wise not much else to say (except perhaps to beg for a sequel)! :)

~V~

this was pretty amusing. liked ziva and tony playing the the ball-and dad, er, i mean, Gibbs, taking it away. hahah. but this line literaly had me laughing out loud:

Ziva nodded her head slowly. “I’ll start making calls. I’m sure I can have someone with a Navy connection dead within the hour.”

You write SO in character. I love it.

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LOL, very cute

very nice...like it:))

Wonderful.

I can completely imagine Tony buying little toys from the market machines.

And Ziva offering to kill someone to get out of a seminar. Ha.

Cute story:)

LOL! Well done!

Okay, sequel where they make the speakers life miserable. It would be a funny scene.

Seriously, too freaking hilarious. You need to go up to DPB and be like, yes, I would like to write for your show. And he will say, alright, you're hired, and we will have hilarity. *dances around*

“They’re the people who got rejected from Good Morning America gigs for being too perky"

Oh, my God. That was...hillarious...I can't think of any other way to discride it...frikin'great story!