Absolutely loved the story so fargreat idea well written. Not sure if it’s just my download, but this chapter most every paragraph seems to end halfway through a sentence... feel like I’m missing quite a lot of the chapter.

Grammar errors everywhere... not even the name of the characters are written correctly.

I hope you up this story

Here I am. Reading it the line break at the bottom as "aftas in butt). And just realizing it's an abbreviation for the title... I'm so smart *facepalm*

That last quip man! Totally hilarious! I also really love the Akatsuki decided to give up on him. :) I really like Akira's character and the relationship/back and forth between him and Hiraku!
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Welp, I'm just 11 years too late. Either way, I'm enjoying this story a lot, so thanks!

Uuh... Who's name is "Kazama"?
(Namikaze) Minato's headcanon name or fake name ...or something?

this book must have sequel! It was full of YOOOUUUUUTTTHHHHH! T~T

rasengan

I rather doubt this is the first time this sort of re-introduction has happened.

The missing-nin always seem to be the most pragmatic characters in the Elemental Countries; which probably makes sense, when you think about it.

Okey I love this story and you really need to question his sanity. But love it all the same.

The missing nin meeting was weird, but not too unlikely in Kishimoto's world.

"I hate orange. In the back of his mind he could hear Kyuubi's rumble of agreement."
/But the kyuubi is orange. Maybe he considers himself a redhead?

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